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Title: Wow...Just wow
Reviewed By: inudewaruika [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2010 18:33 CDT
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I have never been a fan of Sesshomaru/Kagome fics, but this one caught my attention and now I can honestly say that you have done the best job. You did it without screwing Inuyasha over, he was happy at the end of the story. I was happy with what you choose to do to Kikyo...she deserved it.
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Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 13:34 CDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the March 2008 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Links to all of the awards for 2008 can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2008art.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please pick up your award here: http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction%20March0 8/incharacter2nd.jpg ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 01:29 CDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Your story was nominated in the category Best In-character Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open from March 20th 2008 through April 4th 2008 (at midnight). Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
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Title: HiHi!
Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wanted to give you the word for Dragon...Soooo in my japanese class, we've been doing "Year of the animal" nengajou (new years cards) and I believe the correct "technical" term for dragon is "Tatsu". I love your fanfic, I always have. Been rereading it for forever now. But yeah, just wanted to let you know that in case of future writings or anything. :D
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Reviewed By: Sess-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have rated this fic the way I did because it is by far the best fic I have ever read, but I know you forgot to place a small word in one of the earlier chapters, but I have forgotten where. But that is not important. This fic has inspred me to write a fic on my own and hopefully my fic will be at least 1/10th as good as yours. I will continue to read all of your stories and I am going to review them. Thank you for doing what you do and I hope you have a good day^_^
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: angel-fighter [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! What a good story. I just came upon your ranting and was laughing a little. What you wrote was just suitting so well. I could cick such persons. I think you work good (and not only this one story prooves it). The best proove is that it is night and the factor of tiredness is 10 from 10, but I cannot stop myself and I think I will read until morning... Your writing is interesting, enjoying and thrilling. Have I forgotten something? Ah, yes, some people think that it is that easy to write, but they should try by their own and I think would see what it means to get negative critism. I can speak volumes about such a thing. This is story counts to the really good ones without having to complain about anything. What I am sorry for is that I had not time to read Poison, but will catch up with it one day. What else to say, Ah, Sess he is simply sweet and I how you let Inu face his behaviour, really good. I am so sorry to read when one author gets a flame or some bothersome reviews. It makes me soooo sad and I wrote you therefore on this place and not first when I am done with reading. I somehow felt to tell you that I find the story good and like it. It is because I think higly about the work of others. And you are good, there is no point for me to waver. So thank you for the great work and good luck. Angelfighter
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Title: Unworthy One
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 23:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Title: zomg
Reviewed By: Neko Hanyou On: September 08, 2005 07:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am going to be obnoxious... LOVES IT, LOVES ALL OF YOUR STORIES!!!! AIM me: midori appuru
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Title: Unworthy One
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 18:53 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters
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Title: Unworthy One
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 20:40 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: AngelHeart212 On: July 02, 2005 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story. It almost made me cry and that is saying a lot. It was so sad but it all ended well and it had me laughing so hard toward the end. I think you area a great writer. ^_^
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it took me two days to finish your story, but i absolutley loved it. you're an extremely talented writer, and your storyline was so unique. i also enjoy reading alternate pairing fics, but inu/kag are still my favorite. this was so well written and beleivable that i can definitely respect the pairing. i saw that you have another fic that isn't yet completed, so i guess i'll move on to that one. btw, i think it's really cool that you're a guy, seeing how the majority of writers are female. it's nice to get a new perspective. keep up the good work. (sorry my compliment isn't too original) U_U
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Title: Unworthy One
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 01:45 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: FlameTwirler [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 17:28 CDT
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wow, definitely on the dark side, but as a whole has a very enlightening psychological side. great to see you take a different perspective on the situation and add some new elements. definite fav!
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Reviewed By: parvatilotus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my. As always I love your writing. But I dont like the story... *cringes as she expects rocks to be thrown* I'm sorry but im a canon fanatic. But this is the only actual non-canon story that i have ever read that has had skill behind it. So props for great style, vocab and skill. It was intriguing but still im a stupid lil fan girl who is stuck on the standard Inu/Kag, San/Mir and Sess/Kagu pairings. I know i know... Im a dork. I cant wait to read more of your stuff! so keep up the good work. ~Kat
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Title: Unworthy One
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 16:59 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Woo Hoo!
Reviewed By: zrofyre [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 22:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this fic! It is so wonderful, and true. You express the char exactly as I imagined them, and even though it is a sess/kag you don't make inuyasha out to be a total ass, because eventually he realizes and works to make up for it. you had me in tears at the end, absolute sobbing! It was so emotional and took me so many places, I absolutley love it!
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Reviewed By: GothycCoalChambr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 04:30 CST
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wow, alot of emotions in this fic. i have to say out of your fics, this one is my favorite. you are a very talented writer and i look forward to reading your future works. i hope you continue to write many more fics to share with all of us.
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Title: Loved it.
Reviewed By: jeremyhfht [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 07:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read alot, also take the time to examin the story itself. Your story is one of the very few I truely admire. That being the case I give you a 10 in all aspects (altho the spelling was a little off but we all make mistakes). As to anyone who gives this story of near perfict plot, twists, and pure fun in reading it I'll personally grab your throught and strangle you in mid air like the dog demon does to jawkin. I however am not a fan of lemon fics but I wont hold that agenst you. I admire the fact you try to please all "crowds". True overall rating: 11 out of 10 (hehe).
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Reviewed By: kitty_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 10:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story it was so beatiful and very long. i love stories that are long because i like to read a lot. and most of all i like kagome and sesshomaru stories. i think it was kind of messed up what you did to kikyo not that i like her anywase but still. your stor was great.
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Title: Amazing.
Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 01:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually hate Shesso/Kag fics but your twist on it made it really enjoyable. (One picky detail, it's bear children not bare.)
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Reviewed By: busoshwe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2004 01:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story. Love love love it. I keep reading and rereading it cause I just enjoy it that much. *gush* *gush* *gush*
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Reviewed By: Hentai Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 07:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was really suprised to find a fic of such quality with such an unappealing name and summary. Once I got over the initial chapters I was glad that I reserved my judgement till the end. This is a very interesting and well written fic. I stayed up all night until 7:30 in the morning just so I could finish reading it. And all in all it was worth it.
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Reviewed By: monkey face89 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 23:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one of the best stories ever!
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 17:07 CST
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Wow,that was a Great story - Very unique
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 01:21 CST
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This was a great fic. I loved your writeing stlye and the story line was wonderful. I do wonder what happened to Miroku though. I feel a bit sad for him(a bit). I am VERY happy for Kikyou though I'm so glad she got her wish (evil laughter) 'Orion
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Reviewed By: diabloangel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 09:41 CST
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I loved the whole story. Yes i would have liked to gottne more informatino on her future, but i can understand when the story says no. I am alos reading You Darkness i am enjoying it very much. Please keep up with the good work.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 20:45 CST
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More children on the way. My they are going for the big family. Good for them. Poor Kikyo, couldn't even find a somewhat nice person, could she. Well, I am going to watch out for your other story, until then, later.
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Reviewed By: akira139 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 18:55 CST
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its hard to believe its over. such a great story, maybe one day you'll have the inspiration for a sequal.
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Reviewed By: clavira [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 06:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really, really enhoy(ed) reading each chapter of your story, although it was really dark in the beginnning; just wanted to let you know that i like it ;p Well, anyway, I never understood, what "koy/koishi" meant; would you care to explain, please? I´m german speaking, english´s my 2nd language, so bear with me...
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