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 Title: Didnt feel like logging in hehe
Reviewed By: Abarai Renji [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 02, 2005 22:24 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Name: Aoi Koori Luna Age: 15 Height: 6 feet 2 inches Looks: Dark Brown, Green, and White hair, almost always in a Ponytail, Emerald Green, red Devil Tail, and Claws Outfit: Light Blue Shorts, Black Hiking Boots, and a Black T-Shirt with sleeves that reach her Elbows. Evil Outfit: Velvet Black Pants, Black Hiking Boots, Dark Blue T-shirt that has 2 Gold Chains criss-crossing from the Shoulder-Blade Part of the Shirt, to the Side Pockets of the Pants. Personality: Likes to Battle, drinks Blood like Coffee, WONT kill her Friends or Family, if your not one of them, just dont get her Mad. Anger is her ruling Emotion, next to her Sadistic Humor. Fall in Love with: Sephiroth. Powers: Anything that has to do with Ice/Darkness/Animal Transformation. Weapons: A Sword like Clouds, Kunai and Shurikuns. Specialty: To Spy on People please. Why youre Evil: Always loved Animals, Planets, and Nature saw what Humans were doing to them all and slowly, but surly began to Hate them. Now shell Kill Humans, but wont hurt Animals, and Nature. Die or Live: Live, Please. Best Friend: Looks: Has Blood red Hair, Dead-Black Eyes, Blood-red Lipstick, Black Nail Polish, Claws and Grey Wolf Tail. Powers: Controls anything with Death. Name: Starchi Outfits: Reg.: Dark Blue Dress, which flows at the Bottom, ends at her knees. Wears Tight Black Leather Snow Boots. Evil: Tight Black Mini-skirt, and Flowy Halter Top, Tight Dark Blue Leather Snow Boots. Alright I pick Sephiroth then
 Title: My Info
Reviewed By: Shara [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 26, 2005 20:05 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Name:Myone Age:18 Hight:179cm Looks:Black Hair She Whers A Black Dress And Black Boots Pale Skin And Brown/Amber Eyes Evil Outfit:A Short Black Sorcoress Dress And Black Boots Personality:Loves Being Alone And Is Very Cold And BLack Hearted Who I'd Like To Fall In Love With:Irvine Kennas If He Is A Choice Powers:The Power Of Darkness And Fire Specalty:Controling Others Minds To Think Everyone Is After His Or Her Head Why Your Evil:Her Mother And Father Was A Couple Of Powerful People But Were Killed When She Was 16 And So She Began To Practis Sorcorie And Beacuse Of Her Many Died That Angerd Her
 Reviewed By: heavens_night [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 24, 2005 21:58 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
So is there any specific question or do we just post what we know about him?
 Title: BIG ANNOUNCMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Darkmist [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 21, 2004 14:52 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
YES YOU PEOPLE LUV RIKU TO MUCH I HAVE BOUT 4 PEOPLE WHO WANT HIM OK SO.......... I PROPSE THE PERSON WHO KNOWS THE MOST ABOUT HIM WILL GET HIM ALL SUBBMISIONS DUE................................FEBUARY 17! THERE BETTER NOT BE ANY FROM THE BOOKLET I HAVE KDH AND IF IT IS THAT PERSON WILL BE DISSQUALIFIED IT BETTER BE KNOLEDGE U KNO I KNO EVERY THING BOUT HIM OH IF YOU GET 3 THINGS WRONG U WILL LOOSE 1 THING WRONG IS OKAY AND IT MUST ALL! BE SPELLED CORRECT!!!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: HiKaRiKu [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 20, 2004 23:33 CST
Comment/Review:
name:Kaoru age:17 height:6"2 looks:Purple hair,blue eyes,most of the time having a evil grin on her face. outfits:Pink shirt with Black jean pants evil outfit:A Purple sleeve-less shirt with 'Don't kiss me,I'm evil,remember?',And a black skirt. personality:Likes to start everything with a 'Heh' or 'Hn' who you'd like to fall in love with:Riku powers:Dark Magic and alittle of Cure (I have a idea) wepons:Bow and arrow.When shot to a person,it sends darkness into that person. specialty:Good at hearing why your evil:Heartless took the heart of a loved one and swore to kill people she didn't like,especially Heartless. do you want so die or live at the end of the story:Nope. best friend:Daniel A weird,yet,'nice?' person that doesn't care for her evilness,as long as shes cool.Cure and Fire(thats how Kaoru learned to do Cure)of course likes to wear lights colors and opposite things that Kaoru hate. Job:To keep her from killing the cool people and people she should be friends with.
 Title: a little bad news
Reviewed By: Darkmist [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 19, 2004 18:29 CST
Comment/Review:
hey i know i havent put up the first chap but the problem is my comps broke but keep sendin reviews i go to day care cuz my parents work till 5 and i get out of school at 2:45 so i'm gonna be working on it now i couldnt befo cuz she moved and we had to fix up her comp but now her comps fixed plus i did all my presentations/test last week lets sees two spanish presentations both 50 point of my grade big science test and big math test all done the week befo x-mas its sunday the.....20 no its the 19th i'll be workin on the first chap all week in class at lunch even on the 24 my day off of school and the 25 just cuz i'm sorry i havent said any thing so i WILL DO MY BEST RAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWW EH sorry watched THE CABLE GUY and had candy an ice cream ah it was a good day...........ne way i'll get right up on it so merry christmahanakwanaka to you! bye
 Reviewed By: Oni Oji [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 15, 2004 20:16 CST
Comment/Review:
I want to change my guys name. Caine is his name not Alexander.
 Title: Here
Reviewed By: Oni Oji [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 15, 2004 18:41 CST
Comment/Review:
name:Alexander age:19 height:6'0" looks:Black hair that he keeps in a ponytail outfits:same as his evil outfit evil outfit: Black boots, jeans, shirt and coat. A demon tattoo that covers his back. personality:Doesn't like to talk to people (1) who you'd like to fall in love with:Aerith powers:Alchemy and Sorcery weapons:None specialty:his magic let's him see just about whatever he wants why your evil:His soon-to-be wife was killed by a lunatic. The death started a war and put him in a coma. When he came out of it he sluaghtered everyone and decided that Mankind doesn't deserve to exist anymore. do you want so die or live at the end of the story:No who is your best friend:Bahamut.Black dragon. voice of reason, sort of.
 Title: Character Sheet continued
Reviewed By: heavens_night [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 07, 2004 00:36 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Heather is like I said pretty much a lose cannon when it comes anything. She's an insane pyromaniac with a violence fetish. While in her "Evil" form she wears mainly priest clothes. But when in disguise she wears mainly t-shirts a blue jean jacket and a pair of jeans. She Keeps pretty much the same attitude when on either side. Sometimes rude although rather short attentioned. She isn't very good with hiding. She's alot better with explosives and just out right attacking. She uses mainly fire magic. Her weapons are a Katana and for long range attacks Shurikens. Lynn has one of two reasons for usually joining in on something. Lee has joined in on it, or she simply joins the side which promises her the most opportunity to cause chaos and is never loyal to one side for long unless Lee is.
 Title: Character sheet
Reviewed By: heavens_night [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 07, 2004 00:28 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
name:Lee Seina age:16height5'4 looks:Short thin, red hair in a bun several strands and her bangs hanging out giving her the look that she's pretty much constantly fighting or to busy to straiten her hair. Green eye's, solid white skin. The Number 13 tattooed on her right wrist. outfits:School girl uniform. Think Gogo Yubari from Kill Bill. evil outfit: an oriental outfit (High collared top with a rad Sash tied to resemble a butterfly and matching pants.personality:When she's not evil she seems rather gently and almost mysterious and extremely intelligent character. But when her true nature is revealed she's a complete and total *****. She holds strong grudges against people and is completely relentless in her method of fighting.But of course she still retains her intellegent air.(1) who you'd like to fall in love with:RIKU! either one.powers: Anything involving Ice, Spells like Demi and knowledge of dark magic. (No she can't control it but she knows to much for her own good.)wepons:Mace or a fighting fan (Close range) Scythe(long range.) specialty: Pretty much what you said. She also has an intresting knowledge of Ninjitsu and is pretty skilled with a fan. Espeonage (spying) and a master of disguise. why your evil:One will do almost anything for the pursuit of knowledge. do you want so die or live at the end of the story:Live and finnaly who is your best friend: Lynn, who is 17, she has long brown hair. She dresses like a priest. and is pretty much a lose cannon when it
 Title: Character sheet
Reviewed By: heavens_night [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 07, 2004 00:27 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
name:Lee Seina age:16height5\'4 looks:Short thin, red hair in a bun several strands and her bangs hanging out giving her the look that she\'s pretty much constantly fighting or to busy to straiten her hair. Green eye\'s, solid white skin. The Number 13 tattooed on her right wrist. outfits:School girl uniform. Think Gogo Yubari from Kill Bill. evil outfit: an oriental outfit (High collared top with a rad Sash tied to resemble a butterfly and matching pants.personality:When she\'s not evil she seems rather gently and almost mysterious and extremely intelligent character. But when her true nature is revealed she\'s a complete and total *****. She holds strong grudges against people and is completely relentless in her method of fighting.But of course she still retains her intellegent air.(1) who you\'d like to fall in love with:RIKU! either one.powers: Anything involving Ice, Spells like Demi and knowledge of dark magic. (No she can\'t control it but she knows to much for her own good.)wepons:Mace or a fighting fan (Close range) Scythe(long range.) specialty: Pretty much what you said. She also has an intresting knowledge of Ninjitsu and is pretty skilled with a fan. Espeonage (spying) and a master of disguise. why your evil:One will do almost anything for the pursuit of knowledge. do you want so die or live at the end of the story:Live and finnaly who is your best friend: Lynn, who is 17, she had long brown hair. She dresses like a priest. and is pretty much a lose cannon when i
 Reviewed By: black fire angel [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 07, 2004 00:47 CST
Comment/Review:
NAME:Isis Kita AGE:16 HEIGHT:5'9 LOOKS:Black straight waistlength hair with white tips and bangs that frame face that has white tips as well. Slim, slightly tanned and toned. Sapphire blue eyes that hold pain,evil, and amusement. OUTFITS:Black tanktop that says,"Shut up or join the other dead bodies in my closet." Black baggy pants with three silver chains on her right side. A silver hoop earing in her left cartlage. A silver metal armband on her left arm. EVIL OUTFIT:Outfit like Paine's on FFX-2 I'll send a pic if you'd like. PERSONALITY:Deadly,sarcastic,searious and cold. Will kill anyone who mocks her, protective of what friends she has and will kill who ever hurts them in any way. Hate's to be underestamated because she's a female. LIKE TO FALL IN LOVE WITH?:Riku or Tidus POWERS:Premonitions, mind reading, controls water and ice. Acrobatic. WEAPONS: Sai's (the three ponged weapon one of the ninja turtle's use) and a chain whip. SPECIALTY:Theft and Stealth. WHY YOU'RE EVIL:Was abused all of her life by her father so she killed him and wants to hurt others so they can feel what she has been through. She also loves to battle and to kill just cause it gives her a rush. LIVE OR DIE AT THE END?:Umm..die....uh..no I wanna live and finally WHO IS YOUR BEST FRIEND:Don't have one..unless you'd like to be it...^^
 Reviewed By: black fire angel [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 05, 2004 11:37 CST
Comment/Review:
I'll post my evil character as soon as I get home from school ^.^ I hope you like her...so nobody will get hurt..*hides a sai behind her back*...noone will be harmed...trust me..*smirks evilly*
 Title: yay
Reviewed By: Darkmist [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 30, 2004 11:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
got me first 1
 Title: evilpart2
Reviewed By: Shiroikage [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 26, 2004 10:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
After gaining the power, he left and went to the clan. But before he got there, the creature follow him and without a choice he took in the creature(a dragon with feather wings) as his pet(friend)After wiping his clan with his power, he then realise that the dragon was not following for company but for food of the soul. Soon he could not return to his old roots, he chose the path of evil in order to keep his pet(friend) alive and well. Then he met Yuki, a white fox demon who was caught in a trap. Hiryuu being a \'caring\' guy help Yuki out and sure enough Yuki became his close friend when Yuki shows his human form. Together with Hono(Dragon), they became like a pack of wolves. do you want so die or live at the end of the story: Alive please but Hono gone to his real home Friend: Yuki, 175cm, short white hair, green eyes, fair skin, white sweater, a pair of loose jeans, a pair of brown boots, a black choker with a cross chain, can change into a fox or human, skill in stealing, spying, hunting and loves fighting. Yuki is a happy-go-lucky guy/fox, can be a little annoying but knows when to stop since he doesn\'t want to make Hiryuu kill him or Hono to eat him, cunning, quick temper, loves playing jokes on victims... I mean people, understanding and hates women. Why? Because it was a woman who betray him and get him in a trap.
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