| "Demonic Poems" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Jet_black [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 17:48 CST
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O_O wow! Life of Freedom that really happens!?!? Hiei dies!?!? Q_Q *in shock*..................................................................... ........................................................................... ...................Hiei:-_-'... *wacks jet on the head with the helt of his katana* i'm right here damn it!! she said i came back to life!!!! Me:Hiei! thank go... wait a f8ckin minute! why the h*ll did you hit me!? Hiei:*glare* because you were being a baka Me:*glare* you're gonna be sweet and mushy in chapter 3! Hiei: O_O NO!! i'm sorry!! Me: Ok... you win... fior now..o_o OMG I ALMOST FORGOT! I LOVE YOUR POEMS! HIEI!! look what you almost made me do!!!! that's it! you're gonna be mushy!! Hiei:*runs for his reputation in fanfics sake*
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Title: Poems
Reviewed By: KitsuneShadow(not logged in) On: February 21, 2005 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a fabulous poem writer. I thought all the poems were great. Please update soon!!!
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Title: beautiful poems (poems 1-4)
Reviewed By: DG32173 (lazy) On: February 07, 2005 13:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love them all! i especially enjoyed that excerpt from the story in the fourth chapter. i hope you add more poems soon! ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Life of Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 09:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i found out that Hiei can't tell Yukina because it was part of his payment for having the Jagan implanted. the other part was his tear gem. but, anyway, he swore he wouldnt tell. later, the guy who implanted the Jagan (cant remember name) and hiei got into a battle. man said that if hiei could kill him, hiei could tell yukina. hiei killed man but then dies himself. mukuro (sp?) brings him back to life on a machine and...i dunno what happens after that. anyway, i like the poems!
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