| "The King and I" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
| Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] |
Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 15:50 CST
Comment/Review:
u no wat i want. up + date = -^_^-
|
Reviewed By: klutz82 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 14:44 CST
Comment/Review:
i like these two chapters!! i hope inuyasha doesn't leave!! hehe... (then they can go to the castle and sesshoumaru can take care of the girl...because he's sweet like that, unless kagome and inuyasha do, but no. they have shippo...) i can't wait for more. like when inuyasha finally realizes that she knows what he is...update soon...as humanly possible.
|
Reviewed By: klutz82 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 21:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
i liked getting to know kagome more it was interesting...i can't wait to know more about her and more interaction between her and inuyasha!!
|
Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 15:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
yikes thats gotta hurt, i like kag better as a bitch. hate kikyo. & sess is wierd
|
Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 07:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic has a lot of promise! I'm enjoying the unusual way it's written, being mainly in first POV. I'm doing a fic where there's a little bit of that here and there. One thing I've noticed, though...Be careful with tenses. Not that you've had that problem, I know I have...;P I love how this fic is going, and I'm defintely going to keep a watch out for more updates! Ja ne!
|
Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 21:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
ah... kneed in the groin. Ow. My finace came up with an interesting thought about that the other day; something he'd kill to see in a movie. The guy gets kicked in the groin and everything fades white... Then Ghandi appears, a half eaten ham sandwich in one hand. He blinks and leans forward, putting the other hand to his mouth saying "Oooh!" with a very sympathetic voice. I don't think Inuyasha saw Ghandi... But someday, someone should make him.
|
Reviewed By: klutz82 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 18:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is an awesome story so far. i can't wait for more Sesshoumaru!! heehee. that will be so much fun. i don't care that he's a bit out of character...it's nice to see him do something more than raise his head regally and say something like "this sesshoumaru does not...blah blah blah..." i can't wait for more. this is funny...oh miroku and kohaku!! oh my. ^_^
|
Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 09:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
god fucking damnit. everything you write turns out so fucking good! I'm so jealous, I'm green. And I'm the first to review! woohoo! Anyway, interesting plot. I've just read the first chapter so far but it really seems to be going well! I'll get to read the rest soon. But I DO like it. Hope to read more sooon!
|
| Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] |
