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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 06:39 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished reading your fic and I have to say it is amazing what you did with this story. It kinda superise how you made Sesshomaru act so cowardly but then get so brave, love that. And I really hope that Kagome and Inuyasha will get to see each other soon. Plus I hope Kagura can get to Rin and hopefully get to meet Sesshomaru as well, they both need someone to love and hold. So please update and hope you keep it up. Peace...
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 16:05 CST
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Latest Chapter: Yes. Inuyasha leaves to find a bride, leaving his brother Sesshomarou to be king. Unfortunately, Sesshomarou discovers he likes to be king. Bam. Next, he discovers that the politically perfect bride is on her way to mee (and seduce) the king, who isn't really the king. Meanwhile, the king has fallen in love with a miko, who also happens to be a politically correct choice, only he doesn't know. So, he wanders off and meets vile ladies he would have no intention of mating with if they were the last on earth. I pity your characters, Sabichan. You are not very... kind... to them. Oh, well. It makes a most fascinating story. One thing, though. I still don't understand your chapter titles. I mean... I am just so very confused.
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 19:40 CDT
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loves it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: sailor saturn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UI LOVE THIS STORY!!! WHY HAVENT YOU UPDATED!!! HELLO IT'S 2006!!!!!
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Reviewed By: angel_of_hope [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 12:20 CST
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Very cool. I hope Inu gets back to Kags soon.
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Reviewed By: Deadly Crimson [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 21:44 CST
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hey it's me, deadly crimson again. i read sacrifice, but i coudln't review, just tell you that it was fucking awesome, inu is so cute, and this one I like a lot too. When are u gonna update in this one or My will???'
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Reviewed By: Mikki Onigiri [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 17:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find that this style of writing could be expanded soemhow. Not too wordy but with a little more detail. And since I'm no grammar geek, I have no corrections that I should bring up. I truly am enjoying this story. I find that Kagome's character is much stronger and I liked how you are making her powers more evident than how Takahashi-sensei (no offense to Takahashi-sensei for it is her series) does in the series. Sesshoumaru-sama is not someone to be shy and all so I loved how you brought out his strong side as king in Inuyasha's absence. I can't wait for the update!!!
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Title: i like it
Reviewed By: kikyou104 On: August 20, 2005 12:33 CDT
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i really like this story it's great fun and it makes me laugh a lot but half the time i have to stay quiet or i'll wake up the whole house hold...soo keep up the great work and update soon both of the stories
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Title: yah
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well first of all I have to say that I love ALL of the fics you have written and all those still being continued ( yes I love MY WILL). I was really glad to see you starting another great fic please update this one and my will soon. Great writing on both of them. thanks again. J
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Title: The King and I
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 17:14 CDT
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Well I can think of two possible endings where Inuyasha end up with Kagome....I'll just have to wait and see what happens though...
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Reviewed By: leila-chan (nsi) On: August 15, 2005 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor inu. it would suck to settle! i'm glad to see sess getting alittle backbone, sorta. i don't know where you're gonna go with this, seeing as how kagura was the one watching rin, inu has to marry someone else, and sess, well, he's just not sess. but... i love it. i will follow you wherever you take us. : )
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Reviewed By: baka_mai On: August 15, 2005 06:22 CDT
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Man your story is super awsome!! I do hope that inuyaha and Kagome hook up, that would be great:) Your story is still real confusing though. I hope that you update real soon so that it will make sence again... or mabey i just dont get it. It keeps making me think, is Kagome a princess or just having familie issues...i dont know, but please update soon so i can know:) JA NE!!!
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Reviewed By: klutz82 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 17:46 CDT
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That was so sweet. I'm very curious about what is going to happen with Rin and Kagura...and of course Sesshoumaru. I can't wait for more! XD
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Title: The King and I
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 16:39 CDT
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I don't think I've ever reviewed any of your stories, but I had read them all except "The King and I" until today, when I decided I might as well, since it was the only one you updated. It's a good thing I did too. This story is awesome...I think I'll start reviewing your stories more often now as well, since I've started to do that...
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 01:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm. it is so strange, yet disturbingly refreshing to read a fic where sess does not have everyone lying flat on their faces at his feet. ha! maybe he will work his way up to that in this one. i am interested i seeing how you will have inu deal with his conflicting feelings for kagome, and his "duty". very engrossing fic you have here. please update when you have the chance. p.s. i understand about "my will". i will wait as long as you post on atleast one of your fics. ; p
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