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| "Black & White Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Title: sequel
Reviewed By: backlash [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
did you ever write the sequel?
| Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: yuki_sohma_fruits_baskets On: June 01, 2005 00:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god. I just loved it. Everyone was in character and I just love Yuki and Haru together they are the sweetest couple ever. There was everything in it that you need, to make a story. I felt like I was actualy there, I could amagine everything perfectly. In the future you should defenetly consider writing alot more stories. You are exalent at the plot and having everything fit together.
| Reviewed By: yuki_sohma_fruits_baskets On: June 01, 2005 00:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god. I just loved it. Everyone was in character and I just love Yuki and Haru together they are the sweetest couple ever. There was everything in it that you need, to make a story. I felt like I was actualy there, I could amagine everything perfectly. In the future you should defenetly consider writing alot more stories. You are exalent at the plot and having everything fit together.
| Title: Xia_Gravi@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Xia On: March 02, 2005 15:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniiiiiiff* I LOVE this fic! HaruxYuki is my absolute favourite Furuba pairing and this was just a terrific find. There are SO LITTLE stories with that pairing it make me cry just thinking about it! Thank you for a wonderfully in depth, creative, detailed, and fun fic and I hope to see more of this pairing from you in the future! And hopefully, *crosses fingers* you get some inspiration for the sequel to this? *puppy eyes* I was so disappointed to find that you took it down. *sniff* I was so hoping to find out what happened with Yuki and Haru! Don't give up! :) Anyway, again thanks for the great fic and hope to see more. :)
| Reviewed By: Deadly Wispers [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 16:45 CST
Comment/Review:
hi again, KR told me a while ago that B&WH II was deleted offa ff.n, that really sucks! you know, one of my fics was deleted and then later one they went and deleted my name without even giving me a notice! that's why i don't post on my name on there anymore, instead i post on KR and my shared name ^___^;; also, do they keep deleting it on here too? i noticed you kept updating and whenever i go to read it doesn't work T.T well, if it does you should just change the name, summary, and author's notes, lol, yeah, just put that it's the sequile in the summary, it MIGHT work ^___^;; maybe i should try that, hahah. anywho, i really hope you get it up soon, the 2 chapters that i DID get to read were really good so far, and it's unfair that they deleted it, and there really was no reason for them to have deleted it, i've seen a LOT of stuff other than your fic that were basically just smut fics and they never get deleted..they've got way to many rules now, that's why my friend and i have created the PWBFFNFF (people who boycot fanfiction.net for fun) list. ^^ i should probubly go post it on my websites and xanga soon, lol ^___^;; anywho, keep up the good work, i really love your writing..oh, and: SHELVES! LOL ^^
| Title: Hello....
Reviewed By: varda101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I read this story on fanfiction.net, and it was one of my favorites!! :)Yeah, I really really loved reading it, hopefully you'll write more stories (you're really good with yuki/haru pairing)!!!
| Reviewed By: AyameLover#? On: November 27, 2004 10:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have GOT to be KIDDING ME!!!!! There's only ONE OTHER REVIEW?!?!?! *shakes head* I just don't get it..... Oh, sorry, on to my review..... I love it!!! This is such a kewl fic: I love the way you have mixed drama, angst, "sexiness"(heh...go, Black Haru!!!), and comedy -- true perfection!!! The characters and descriptions are great; very well done!!! Keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!! Bye!!! ^__~
| Title: D&G
Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 17:30 CST
Comment/Review:
*cough* Call me obsessive...but I just wanted to be the first one to review this. ^^
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