| "Hero High School Life" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Clonetrooper198 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 09:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fun to read, i think it could be better if you used sonic's real brother and sister(Did you ever watch SU?)
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Title: please ohh please ohh pleaseeeeeee
Reviewed By: the rad red logging in is evil On: August 02, 2005 14:45 CDT
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greeting sabrina i will soon be writing a new fic up and twill be th last fic i write with tom in centering around his life and how he dies and i would really like sabrina to be somwere in his life aswell as christina and you shall have shadow and tom will die a misrable death at the end as i torture him through life i do this because im evil so if you could e mail me back with ya awnser then twill make tom happy before i have him tortured and killed tom: cant i just have a cute relationship with tikal? me: NO! you shall liveyour misrable life have your knuckles ripped from your hands and become the evilest serial killer ever and then you may get shot in the face by the woman you love tom: hmm i see youre proposal but i have a better idea... how about no and you let me live my life me ...NO i created you and ill sure as hell kill you tom: why me: because your crazy tom: because you made me! me: i dont care now you obey like good doomed echidna tom: b but i love tikal i love life i love to see the guts spray out of babys when you stamp on there chests me: just fot that your getting cream as a little sister tom: how? and you wouldent dare! me: ohh i will and ill find some way!
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Title: pickle and pie
Reviewed By: the rad red (never shall he log in !) On: February 10, 2005 04:10 CST
Comment/Review:
lol sabrina is in the perverted adventures of sonic the hedgehog she and shado are ganna start dating becase he ganna find out amy has been fucking melvin lol
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Title: Keep going! Keep going!
Reviewed By: Electrode the Hedgehog (not logged in) On: November 15, 2004 14:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Please keep the story going! You and Christinatails are doing great! Also, I wonder if Shadow and Sabrina's schedules got mixed up back there... Regardless, this is a great story! See ya!
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Reviewed By: Cyberwarriorose On: November 14, 2004 02:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey cool story...I enjoyed reading it/ will you be updating soon?
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Reviewed By: Surj (didn't botha ta login) On: November 11, 2004 12:33 CST
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Yo! I know Christina's REAL schedule in real life! In 1st period, she has Acting 1. In 2nd, she has Advanced Biology. In 3rd, she has Advanced English. In 4th, she has Algebra 2. In 5th, she has Treble Choir. In 6th, she has advisory, then lunch. In 7th, she has PE. And in 8th, she has College Prep Social Studies. In the next semester though, both her 1st and 7th period changes to Computer Tech 1 and Beginning Guitar 1. Thought I should let ya know. She could also be the top student if she wanted, cuz she has all the top classes! Ask her school counselor! Update soon! Lata!
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Reviewed By: christinatails(forgot to login) On: November 03, 2004 15:49 CST
Comment/Review:
Ello again! And hooray! the rad red likes it! He's a friend of mine and also a member! I'll be sending ya an e-mail soon with the idea for the nexr chapter! Buh-bye for now!
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Title: weres my waulnuts
Reviewed By: the rad red can't be bothed to log in On: November 03, 2004 04:40 CST
Comment/Review:
yay me like this fic so far* ads 2 faves*
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