| "Demon Reborn" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Good
Reviewed By: Princess_Lalaith [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 09:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok. First the good things. I think you took an original path for this fic; I mean, I've read many fics that handle Naruto's story in a different way, but never like this. That's good, and you're also good at doing some comedy and making the story move at a fast pace. Now to the bad things...well, not necesarily bad. I think your chapters are kinda short. I'm just getting excited about something and puff! it's over. You should try and do longer chapters. And for the questions: Who's the third member of Team 7, I mean in Naruto's place. Will Naruto make peace with Iruka-sensei and the rest? And when are you gonna update?
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Reviewed By: Dragon Warrior Ray [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 06:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY! But for the love of God... UPDATE! Cya! Ray
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Reviewed By: tasukis_gecko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 10:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice I'm Loving your story!! Don't Leave me hangin for too long =)
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Title: please update!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: edens chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 00:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really really really like this fic. i love your writing style and the story plot is a wonderful eye catcher. but you need to update! i check back every three days in hops that you will, but so far, no luck! im guessing its a real bad case of writers block, or you just haven't realised that people are waiting. or you're just busy. but pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease update!
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Reviewed By: taggerung [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon. it has been really good so far
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Reviewed By: questofdreams [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 19:07 CST
Comment/Review:
hmm....It's interesting how you've recreated the events of the chuunin exam to go with your story. I hope you don't wait so long for the next update ^_^
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 08:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow. Sounds like a real cool story. Keep up the great work. coolsa.
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Reviewed By: questofdreams [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 22:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well...you've definitely captured my interest...and I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next ^_^ and what the heck Naruto had been up to in that one year span. Nice job overall! Will be keeping a watch on this fic ^_^
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Reviewed By: twilight aura [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 17:08 CST
Comment/Review:
nice update!the guys with the orange seems just like naruto!^^update please!
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Reviewed By: twilight aura [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 15:56 CST
Comment/Review:
thats a gewd story you have started here!^^ but not much of a plot yet though but i know you have one in mind!^^please update!
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