| "Zorra" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: wow!! ............*-*
Reviewed By: bingle boogle bag On: February 16, 2005 22:12 CST
Comment/Review:
i wrote the same thing as......yeah........*-*........i didn't even notice.........i mean........i'm physicic.......i knew what he was thinking.......
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Reviewed By: bingle boogle bag On: February 16, 2005 22:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story, i know its a little late to write any reviews but just one question, don't take this the wrong way but if she was raped then bitten wouldn't she turn into a ghoul???
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Reviewed By: the sixteenth kitten that lost its mitten [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good story!sorry the review is so late, just one question: not to bring up any offense or anythingso very sorry but if she was raped then bitten wouldnt astra turn into a ghoul???oh well....great story none the less keep it up.
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