Title: Hmm....
Reviewed By: Rhigama On: November 08, 2004 15:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is not up to your skill level. I know you, and I know you can do better. Some advice for you to follow is to not obsess over the same characters. And overuseing romantic scenes is nearly a theme in your writings. I highly suggest that you try harder, and that you gain yourself more patience. My apologies if I have been too harsh in my judgements.
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