| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] |
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 06:43 PST
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Touche', touche'. Very nicely done, as always. Glad to see that Sesshoumaru is okay. And hm, what's with Kagome's new found power? Gotta cut this short-- time to start thinking about getting to today's classes. Loved it. Keep up the amazing work!! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: February 16, 2005 05:05 PST
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ba! agh! but! nani!? sputters....no stoping there. NOT fair...humm i guess it was that easy to kill her...Ok more please. 'Orion
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: LadyOrion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 01:58 PST
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COOL.....I was right....WOW....faints...:P Great chapeter. SESSHY!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOO....aw how fitting to finaly see that Inuyasha DOSE NOT hate his brother. SESSHY!!!(panics for a full 5 mins) Oh and for some reason this defeat seems a bit TOO easy for me...I hope they don't let their guards down 'Orion
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Reviewed By: ressa On: February 15, 2005 19:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would have never guessed her koishi was Kagewaki.Please tell me you did not kill off Sesshoumaru again. You have done yet another good job in writing fiction now to finish it up, bring back Sesshoumaru. You are going to bring him back...aren't you? sign ressa
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Reviewed By: Lena17 On: February 15, 2005 19:33 PST
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I have to admit..I've enjoyed reading everyone of the fictions you have made so far..since I found them way back in the dawn of time when you were wondering about how purity should go. I have to say, that these stories have really blossomed....it's awesome..these plots you weave! And each are so very unique!
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 18:20 PST
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wow. ::claps hands:: wow. To think of it, Sesshoumaru [i know he's not dead] would have died like his daddy, with the building colapsing on him and stuff... I also thought the jewel was only made for wishing, so... if she had two shikon no tamas... does that mean more wishes? or is the shikon no tama made for power only? The episodes are kinda confusing... to me atleast.
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Title: Aha!
Reviewed By: Leeloo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 17:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah. I was sort of right, when I emailed you...thinking it was Onigumo. It wasn't Naraku, but it kind of was...something to that effect... And I'm confused about one thing...wasn't Kagewaki a kindhearted man? I vaguely remember the first encounter with Naraku and Sango, and he said something about Kagewaki ordering her care and recovery...correct me if I'm wrong. The way he's depicted here is one of those sadistic super-lovers, instead of a goodish-guy. Oh well. It allows for creative character development, if nothing else. Well done.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 17:49 PST
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Well, I was partly right. She just didn't believe there was a Naraku. Now then. Sesshoumaru had better not be dead. That is just not right. Besides the mighty lord of the west can't die from a colapsed building. No way. Update soon, later.
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 15:12 PST
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Okay, now I'm confused. Are you pulling a technicality on us? Kagewaki was a human lord killed by Naraku (it is assumed) in order to take his appearence. Sooo...her koishii *was* Naraku but not to her? Is that what I am to understand? Sneaky wench. Very, very clever. I'm quite pleased that Sessy did the dirty, messy deed in killing her. About damned time. Loose ends, though! All the loose ends! How does Kagura come back? Is Sessy alive (:::nervously::: Of course he is...right?)? And of course The Shikon no Tama....what becomes of it?
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Reviewed By: Patriot On: February 15, 2005 14:07 PST
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Well, my own theory was off, but I did get the koishii right. So it was Kagewaki after all. My theory was that Hisa thought the Inu-tachi killed Kagewaki when they killed Naraku, as I had now wrongfully assumed that Kagewaki was actually a demon and Naraku had absorbed him, meaning that when the Inu-tachi finally killed Naraku, Kagewaki was destroyed as well. I was wrong on that part. Excellent chapter. I agree with letting Sess be the one to kill her. I thought what Hisa had done to Inu and Kagome was bad, but after reading some other reviews and thinking some myself, I realize that she did stuff far worse to Sesshomaru, bringing Kagura back like she did just to control her against her will, and kill her like that in front of him. I still would've liked it even better if Sess had used his poison claws and killed her slowly, then revived her with Tenseiga maybe once or twice just so he could kill her that same way again.
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Title: another awesome chapter
Reviewed By: Minerva24 On: February 15, 2005 13:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*GASP* OOOOOOHHHH NOOOOOO!!! *GASP* SESSHOUMARU SAMAAAAAA!!!!!! What an evil cliffy... Sue how dare you... *faints*
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Reviewed By: skne On: February 15, 2005 13:29 PST
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Ooh, nicely done. Enjoyed this particular "cliffy." Love the development of Sesshoumaru.
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 13:13 PST
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oh,cliffy. i hate cliffies! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Angelstars (not signed in) On: February 15, 2005 11:54 PST
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Ahh, Kagewaki Hitomi WAS her koishii, though we knew him as Naraku. Hisa was just another pawn to be played; and now to think all of that has happened and now you leave us with another HUGE cliffy! Not Sesshoumaru-sama! Please NO! Ahhh my poor heart can't take it! I adored Inuyasha at the ending of this chapter, his tears for Kagome and cry of desperation to get to his half-brother... the angst and drama is killing me!!
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Title: adamile
Reviewed By: adamilej On: February 15, 2005 11:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter as always. What I don't understand is did naraku create her or how did she become a hanyou. thanks again. J
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