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 Title: *whimpers* Sesshy?
Reviewed By: Lady_Yukiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 15, 2005 11:10 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
So Hisa is dead. Even though she was the villian, I do feel bad for her. All her actions were done out of love, but problem was she fell in love with the wrong person. I'm very happy that it was Sesshoumaru who finished her off, since IMO she hurt him the most out of all the characters. But now I'm going to spend a whole day worrying over the fate over Sesshy. And I really like the ending of this chapter, because I think it shows that Yasha does have a brotherly attachment to Sesshy, even though he'd never admit it.
 Title: AAAAAAGHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Hanyou_Miko_Higurashi (not signed in)  On: February 15, 2005 11:01 PST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*screams every available obscenity known to man and then some* There WILL be Tetsusaiga shoving if I have to stalk you down myself!! What a place to leave off!! *scowls* OK, I'm still a little smug about being right, I was high as a fucking kite yesterday when I got your email confirming it. (oh the pride of a hanyou gilr ne?) GREAT Chapter, even if our fave fluffy taiyoukai's fate is undetermined. I think, if you'd like and let me, I'd like to draw that pic, the one where Shippou's hugging Kagome and vice versa with Inuyasha hugging the both of them. Just thought I'd ask. Keep writing, I can't wait to see what happens next! Ja matta ne!
 Reviewed By: leelu821 (not signed in)  On: February 15, 2005 10:45 PST
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I knew it was Naraku! You tried to trick us! How dare you! LOL I knew it was him all along. It was Hisadaicho that refused to believe it was Naraku. Somehow I think YOU are really Hisadaicho in disguise. Well, no wait...that can't be right. 'Cause then you'd be dead. LOL Sesshoumaru can't be dead! And InuYasha frantically looking for him? Awwwwwwwwww! Brotherly love! LOL
 Title: Ahh....
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in  On: February 15, 2005 10:31 PST
Comment/Review:
It WAS Kagewaki! A question still remains though; whether it was the 'man' who Hisadaicho/Emi was with before Naraku replaced him (his retainers were commenting about the young lord's long illness) or was it 'Naraku' all along? I can easily see Naraku putting her thru that perverted hell too 'prime' her for his plans. (Kinda looks like she was a back-up plan, just in case and sooo like him to over-think everything to death just to out-smart the opposition) But then again, if the real Kagewaki was just as privately twisted, maybe Naraku just saw the opportunity for what it was and continued in the same manner; ultimately taking advantage for his own purposes. (Also, very in character for him) She may have been transformed from human to hanyou by a complicated process, but she wouldn't smell like Naraku because she was never a part of him. Which just added to the confusion. -- Nice plot! -- Now we don't know if Sesshoumaru survived the collapse...oh wait, he's "Sesshoumaru"...the Almighty! Of course he did. LOL!! But there is still the mystery of Kagura. How can she be there in the present if she is dead? For the second time. --- Great chapter.
 Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in  On: February 15, 2005 10:28 PST
Comment/Review:
Stunned. I am stunned, in a good way of course! I just love how Sesshoumaru was portrayed. I feel like you've shown us something that no one else has been able to do. And even thought I realize that he is alive in the future-- it still makes me wonder if there is some whole catch 22 and he is, infact, dead, hahaha. Gotta love those copyrighted twist and turns that you are famous for. PS-- yea, I copyrighted them for you; hope you don't mind. ;) Ah, can't wait to see what will happen. Also loved the emtional stuggle on Inuyasha at the end. Very touching, moving, etc. Loved it. You do amazing work. --Aitu
 Reviewed By: InuyashaGirl2610 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 15, 2005 09:54 PST
Comment/Review:
So, koishii technically was Naraku, but Hisadaicho was in denial, saying that he was still Kagewaki. Is that right? I can't believe that I never thought about Kagewaki, you're a sneaky one Sue!
 Reviewed By: Inuyashas kagome [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 15, 2005 09:06 PST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Nah Sessy is too stubborn for that! YAY! I had a brainstorm during the last chapter and figured it might be Kagewaki. I had thought of him before, but discounted him because he was human... You are one sneaky wench! ^-^ Ahh I really enjoyed the suspense throughout this one, regarding her koiishi. Brilliant, just brilliant! ^-^
 Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 15, 2005 08:39 PST
Comment/Review:
keh. if Sesshoumaru let himself die he is weaker than InuYasha would even admit, no way the tai-youkai died in just a crumbling castle.
 Title: Grrrr.....cliffe
Reviewed By: Lady_Yukiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 14, 2005 20:03 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
@_@ Hisa wants Kagome to make another Shikon no tama? No wonder she's been so patient at working at making Kagome stronger. I hope Yasha can get there in time to help Kagome. And who will destroy Hisa? Beause there are a lot people who have her at the top of their hit list. Anyways I'll be counting down the minutes until the next chapter appears.
 Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not loggd in  On: February 14, 2005 19:57 PST
Comment/Review:
wonderful updates to the wonderful story. i am so engrossed in now this and Purity 2 that i can't wait to get out of my classes to see if either was updated. the way you have wrapped the plot together with such adimate detail and such near percise character depictions...i say it in every review i have ever left for you and now i shall say it again (what fun would it be if i didn't?): you're writing is amazing. i bow to you. this story is absolutly fantabolus. (refer to comedian Eddie Izzard for that one). i can't wait to see what happens...especially when more mention of her koishii comes into play. that's great that Sango is playing a role in here to with it. keep it up!!!
 Reviewed By: Patriot  On: February 14, 2005 19:15 PST
Comment/Review:
Bit of inspiration just hit me. I think I now know for sure who the koishii is, and how the Inu-tachi killed him. For everybody else, re-watch episodes 24-25, and 30 VERY, VERY closely if you want to try and figure out my theory. Sueric, if I'm right, I'm trying my best to make everybody else work to see what my theory is.
 Reviewed By: PrncessS [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 14, 2005 18:28 PST
Comment/Review:
Waaaaiiiii!!!!! XD That was so good! I still don't know who her koishii is tho....is it the prince whose body Naraku stole? What an evil plot. Please please update soon, I'm literally dying to find out what happens!!! ^_^
 Reviewed By: leelu821 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 14, 2005 18:19 PST
Comment/Review:
No way! Damn, Hisadaicho is smart! Who would have thought that she was planning this all along. So, she needs the combined power of two Shikon Jewels? Not cool. I kept thinking you were going to reveal who Koishii was at the end and leave us with another cliffy, but I guess it's not that easy, huh? LOL I definitely can't wait till tomorrow's update!!
 Reviewed By: Patriot  On: February 14, 2005 16:55 PST
Comment/Review:
OK. Hisa is much, Much, MUCH worse than Naraku, and deserves to have Sess kill her with his poison claws, then revive her with Tenseiga and kill her that way again 1000 times over! I think too now that Kagewaki is the koishii. Great cliffhangers as usual, you got me wanting to play hookey and not go to work tomorrow so I can wait for your next post!
 Title: Amazing writting
Reviewed By: Diamond Sun [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 14, 2005 16:51 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
First time reviewing, and I had ment to do it much earlier, but here it goes. Your stories are absolutely amazing! The emotion, the suspense, and the writing is beautiful. Everyday I look forward to reading a new chapter, and everyday I'm surprised by what has been written. While reading your stories, I have laughed, I have cried, and I have screamed in anger when something bad happens to Inu Yasha and the gang. I have always looked forward to the new chapters, and I will be looking forward to the rest of this story. Keep up the good work Sueric, and have a Happy Valentines Day.
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