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 Title: neh
Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen angel  On: February 01, 2005 20:55 PST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
lol! that was so cute! i love inu at the end of that chapter! that was adorable.. poor guy. XD i know how he feels, insecurities with people.. ::Shiver:: heheh, i wish him luck. x_x; btw.. whatever happened to "not letting Kagome out of his sight?" I SO saw that coming..
 Reviewed By: Patriot  On: February 01, 2005 19:13 PST
Comment/Review:
Man, you like to keep us waiting, don't you? Oh well, have to wait till next chapter to see what happens when they both finally succumb to the need to sleep! Are you planning on them falling asleep together (now that the vial's broke) on the night of the new or full moon too? Don't know what InuYasha's going to do now on those nights with the vial now broke!
 Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 01, 2005 19:09 PST
Comment/Review:
LOL!!!!! Omigod! Kagome's gonna freak???? All this because she didn't.... Well, you know. I don't know who's headed for a breakdown first, Inu-Yasha or Kagome. Hey, haven't heard from Sessy-land in awhile :( I miss them....
 Reviewed By: leelu821 (not signed in)  On: February 01, 2005 18:31 PST
Comment/Review:
Oh so that's where the drop of blood came from! But wait, how did she do that without him noticing? Sneaky, sneaky Hisadaicho. She gets smarter everyday. I'm starting to hate her more than ever. Heh, I wonder how long it'll take InuYasha to force himself to stay awake. Hehehe.
 Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 01, 2005 18:10 PST
Comment/Review:
Just tell her already. Geesh. He better not be trying the whole sleep deprevation(sp). Poor Kagome. I like the idea of tying him down to get him to tell her. Course if she did that, he might not think his dreams were so bad. Just that they should have been there anyways. Update soon, later.
 Title: ROFLMAO!!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 01, 2005 15:21 PST
Comment/Review:
OMG, that has got to be a first for announcing your relationship; screaming at your significant other about how big an idiot he is! You're killin' me!! --- Oh my...InuYasha is trying to keep Kagome awake...the seal on the vial is broken...the mixing of the blood also mixed the effects. o.O! He won't have to tell her what was in his dreams...she'll find out the hard way. And there is no way he can keep her awake indefinitely; she's human. Sleep deprivation can cause serious mental and health problems. His plan born of his embarrassment is faulty. Eventually she'll just collapse, and I can't see him letting her get that bad. One way or another...O Evil Plotter, weave your web until your prey is thouroughly entangled. "Satin" must be proud of you! LOL
 Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 01, 2005 15:01 PST
Comment/Review:
wow.. that was interesting.. can't wait till kagome finds out..
 Title: !!!
Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 (not logged in)  On: February 01, 2005 14:48 PST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
BWAHAHA!!! LOL POOR INUYASHA!!! Oh I feel so bad for him!! Aw come on, is it really *that* hard for him to admit to something? What's the worst thing that could happen??
 Title: Lara Roberts
Reviewed By: Lara Roberts [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 01, 2005 13:50 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love your story!!!!! It's so hard to come up with something good to day when you already have so many people praising your work, so here it goes....ahem.....you are an amazing author with great talent, keep up the writing ^_^
 Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in  On: February 01, 2005 13:33 PST
Comment/Review:
ouuu-- Is inuyasha afraid to sleep because the toxin bottle is breaking? ou ou ou. Can't wait tosee what happens next! Great job, too!!! ---Aitu
 Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 01, 2005 11:46 PST
Comment/Review:
Eee, sneaky baka yasha! Trying to keep Kagome awake on purpose.. I don't think Kagome will fall for it though, she's too smart for her own good! Talk about desperation lol. Can't blame him for thinking his dreams are that bad, considering he comes from a time where that kind of thing is just not acceptable to mention to a young maiden, and added to the fact he's hanyou. Ah, but he forgets; Kagome is from a time where sex is an open book and is everywhere! I really don't think she'll mind acting out his dreams…still, give the pup a bone for his efforts to steer away from the impending doom of saucy, hot and steamy dreams galore!! *chuckle*
 Reviewed By: Lena17  On: February 01, 2005 11:05 PST
Comment/Review:
Hmm...you know...through all of this, one thing is deffinatly proven. Inuyasha is no master of stealth :P
 Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 01, 2005 10:46 PST
Comment/Review:
Love the 'blurting' of their mated status.. and Sango's ear-pulling of her husband, and them not actually leaving except beyond the door... Why does Inuyasha keep things from her.. it just makes her more upset in the end.. Kagome will have a fit when she finds out the bottle is broken, and even more so because she'll have been sleep deprived for however long Inuyasha can keep them both awake.. silly baka hanyou
 Reviewed By: serendith (not signed in)  On: February 01, 2005 10:25 PST
Comment/Review:
So she wanted Kagome to sleep with InuYasha so that their blood would mingle and Kagome would thus be infected - giving her an "in" to Kagomes mind/dreams ... Am I on the right track?
 Reviewed By: care102  On: January 31, 2005 19:53 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh no hisadaicho broke the vial. Thank you so much for answering my questions that was so cool seeing my review on the screen. I don't mean to sound lame. But any way I can see the change in Kagome and Inuyasha. But there won't be even 1 "l love you"? I can't wait to see Kagome's reaction and both her and Inuyasha's face if or when Inu tells of his dreams.hehehe. OH and im really sorry if my last review's questions about inu and kag sounded like flames cause' they were not by any means anything like that. love your writing!
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