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| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] | | Pages (85): [ « ‹ 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 › » ] | Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 17:15 PST
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awesome.. can't wait to see the next chapter
| Reviewed By: leelu821 (not signed in) On: January 26, 2005 14:39 PST
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HAHAHA! That was great! I thought he was going to tell her that she was pregnant. LOL Hmmm, I wonder if she's going to tell InuYasha about youkai being in her time. Wouldn't he have noticed by now after going through the well so many times? And is that why he thought she was in trouble? 'Cause she got pricked on the finger? Ack! So many things going through my head now! So many different things could happen! My poor lil' mind... LOL
| Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 13:55 PST
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Ah yes, I did see that happening. The chapter was just so telling. How does one find a youkai doctor? Do they advertise in the paper? (And can you just *imagine* that?) Sorry, being silly. Cute chapter, I loved Inu-Yasha and Miroku bantering. Wonderfully brilliant.
| Title: yay
Reviewed By: Anime Fan (sry, it won't let me login) [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 12:33 PST
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ok, well, i'm not really one to review, but this last chappie was GREAT! (along with the lemon, and the angst) keep at it. i just have a question for the last chappie... if the youkai doctor knew she was the Miko of Legend, let alone who her mate ("partner") was, how come she didn't notice the toxin? because if psrt of his blood has fused with Kagome's wouldn't that have fused as well? but anyways...luv your story (all of 'em, but this one is my fav) ~Anime Fan~ =^~.-^=
| Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 09:58 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol ok, well I guess he never really needs to use it. (And hey! the japanese is not hard to spell, i suck at spelling English words...lol) ja ne.
| Title: "I love the way you love me..." J.M.Montgomery
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: January 26, 2005 08:56 PST
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Well, I got my giggles at InuYasha's expence again. His infernal stubborness is so cute, especially when he's trying to winkle an answer from Miroku without actually asking the question. And Kagome finding out a few physiological Youkai related facts just put the capper on things. She was embarressed enough to have to answer those intimate questions and hoping her mother wasn't close enough to overhear, but to be told, "sorry, we can't use your blood because..." was a surprise. Admittedly, InuYasha doesn't know everything that occurs from 'mating' (how could he know what modern medical technology has discovered?) but Kagome's final thought just summed up her state of mind completely! LMAO!! --- Anytime we get to hear InuYasha's honest thoughts, without all of his defensive comments mucking things up, and exposing the depth of his true feelings always gets to me. (You do this so well!) Makes me want to grab my plushie and squeeze the stuffing out of it! (Yes, I have an Inu plushie...and Miroku and Sess! Hehe) Thanks, great chapter
| Reviewed By: Doctor Emmit Brown [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 08:12 PST
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heh, that was funny. Born before 1977? You bet yor ass he was! :D I also think I figured out how they didn't act out his dreams. It's either that they need to do it up the tree, or have oral (or both). Had a hard time remembering what happened in the dream, so it agrivated me a bit. Anywho, great chapter again. Keep up the good work, and just ignore those detractors who only want the lemons.
| Reviewed By: kolohe (not signed in) On: January 25, 2005 23:10 PST
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hey sueric... thank goodness you didn't let that idiotic comment keep you from writing. you are a wonderful author with incredible talent and skill and we as readers are truly privileged that you have chosen to share said skills with us. keep writing for YOU, not for anyone else. the last three chapters were, simply put, amazing. you captured a love so deep, it's practically beyond commprehension. you managed to capture it. i loved the encounter with totosai (you portrayed him perfectly) and ichisaru & shippo are just the cutest. i'm addicted to your stories, so i check practically every day to see if there's an update. thanks for continuing. *note* canon also generally refers to literature that has been accepted into the mainstream as "classic" and the "original" version of a story. i'm definitely not saying you're wrong, just adding on to the definition =).
| Reviewed By: FireTigerSoul [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 20:25 PST
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((No, they don't. That is a fanfic fairy tale...It isn't fact. Ms. Takahashi never made reference to it anywhere.)) I completely understand your point about Inuyasha not wanting to hurt Kagome in your story. But...these are demon mating rituals we're talking about here...I don't think there is a 'fact' involved. Even if Ms. Takahashi put it into the manga, it still wouldn't be considered a fact because demons aren't real. So, really, fanfic writers are free to add in whatever they wish about mating rituals, right? Completely off topic, I enjoyed this chapter very much. The mystery behind Hisadaicho is really keeping me on the edge of my seat. FireTigerSoul
| Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 (...) On: January 25, 2005 20:16 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome, as always. unique writing style has me hooked, i just cant help coming back for more!
| Reviewed By: dat_angelbaby252 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 19:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read every single one of you fanfictions and I have just now decided to review. I had been meaning to earlier, but I hadn't had the chance. I have been following this fanfiction from day one and I have loved it. You are one of my favorite authors, so keep it up.
| Reviewed By: leelu821 (I tried signing in...) [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 18:09 PST
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So, is Kagura still on her "mission" to kill Sesshoumaru? And if so, does Sesshy know yet? I didn't get that little conversation they had. Or maybe I'm just really slow and can't put two and two together. LOL. And yea, my friend focuses on one character all the time. So I guess it is harder. *shrugs* I wouldn't know. I'm not good at writing. I leave that to the smart people. Hehehe
| Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 17:31 PST
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You are really doing great. I love every scene. I am starting to wonder about that scene with Sesshoumaru in the future. Why do I get the feeling that it's not what it appeared to be. Hope you can update soon, later.
| Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 17:31 PST
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You are really doing great. I love every scene. I am starting to wonder about that scene with Sesshoumaru in the future. Why do I get the feeling that it's not what it appeared to be. Hope you can update soon, later.
| Title: Questions, questions....
Reviewed By: Shoukamiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 16:54 PST
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Ok, so if Kagura can't tell Sesshomaru what's going on, would her body allow her to confide in someone else? Say...Kagome maybe? Since the talisman helps Kagome heal faster, will it also heighten her senses a little, you know like her smell or hearing?Soooo...when are they going to tell mama? And would being mates weaken the disguise Hisadaicho has when she's around Inuyasha? Gomen ne. I just wanted to figure some things out.^_^
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