| "The Second Stallion" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: just another review
Reviewed By: Nuku (not signed in) On: February 14, 2005 00:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just a few notes for each of the chapters written: In the first chapter, yeah you know it's bad when all you have to do is mention Mu's name and I start to purr. Love the fact that the Aries saint was included in this, lots of other fics focus on the Bronze Boys. Second chapter, the ending was just priceless. I could imagine the look on Aiolia's face and I had thought something serious had actually happened and laughed when I read it was just about Ryouga-san's bad sense of direction. Third: I love the fight scene and the fact that Ranma's pulling everything in himself together to become stronger. The thing I can't understand though is people complaining that Ranma is too strong. Have they even seen the Ranma 1/2 series? He usually ends up either winning every fight he goes into or looses only once to an opponent before figuring out their weaknesses. *sighs* Well I can't wait to find out what spring Ranma fell into, I'll be waiting for the next chapter with baited breath.
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: HyperMan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 12:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great fic! I really haven't read many of the Sait Seiya books, because their hard to come by. I like your story though and it does read like the manga. I still think Shun is a girl though^_^ and some of the things Kido did to get the fighters was pretty underhanded.
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Reviewed By: shadowdragon85 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 19:24 CST
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hey isn't Ranma Seiya's brother?
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Reviewed By: Chi Vayne On: November 13, 2004 00:29 CST
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I think the main use of the curse is for comedic effect - having him switch at the most embarrassing times. If you want to curse him, I think it should be to include this kind of humor, otherwise the curse is not needed.
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Reviewed By: S.Y. On: November 10, 2004 00:51 CST
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Nice fic and all. However I just find it a bit dubious that Saga would use Galaxian Explosion as a way for punishing someone. He'll probably just beat Ranma up the same way he beats Ikki and Seiya up, using light speed attacks. And using Ranma to take Seiya's place in removing Shaina's mask is a bit tacky. You could have left it til when Shaina sort of gives up on Seiya when she sees him rescuing Saori from the crow guy.
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