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| "More Then Friends" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Evertide [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 12:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
??? My review didn't show up...oh well, I'll try again. *ahem* When you posted the lemon for your Amy & Cream fic, I thought you were going to end the series at that and I was pleasantly surprised to see it has been continued. I'm not a big fan of the SonicxTails pairing *equips +5 shield of flame warding*, but I thought this fic was quite enjoyable. But now, the problems: I gave you a six for style because most of the fic was composed of two- or three-sentence paragraphs that could have been more condensed. I gave you a five for originality because it didn't really bring anything new to the table. Despite these shortcomings (in my opinion), I liked reading the fic and am glad that you not only continued the series but in such little time as well. In fact, I'd like to help you out by offering to proofread any fic you are writing and wish to have me do so. I'm not the best proofreader, but I really think I can help. If you're interested, send me an e-mail.
| Reviewed By: Evertide [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 12:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
When you posted the lemon for Amy & Cream's fics, I thought you were going to end the series at that, and I was pleasantly surprised to see it continued. I'm not a huge fan of the SonicxTails pairing *equips +5 shield of flame warding*, but I found this story to be quite enjoyable. I gave you a six for style because a lot of the fic is short, two- or three-sentence paragraphs and generally, it could be more condensed. I gave you a five for originality because on the whole, it didn't really bring anything new to the table. Despite these shortcomings (in my opinion), the fic, like your previous ones, was fun to read and I'm glad that you decided to continue the series and in such little time. In fact, I'd really like to help you write by proofreading any stories you write. I'm not the best, but I'd be glad to help. If you're interested, e-mail me.
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