| "Bloody Fangs" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Title: KEWL!!
Reviewed By: Kuramasgal [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything was 10 outta 10! ur story was something i ever read before! it's very enjoyable, unpredictable and exciting! it kept me on the edge of my seat!i thuroughly enjoyed this story! PLZ PLZPLZ Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Youka-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great story! Hope you can update soon. Its really creative
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 18:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay, an update!! and I want to know what kags reaction to Hiei is, update again!!! yarr! ~Tsuki
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Title: chap 6
Reviewed By: regretfully_yours_cassy_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon
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Reviewed By: gothic fuzzies [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome update even if it was short...not like I can talk. Vampires rock!!!! ~_^
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 21:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well its been a while, will you update now? *puppydog face* pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese?? ~Tsuki
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 00:54 CDT
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damn thing cut off half my review. as i was saying b4 MM so RUDELY cut me off. i hope u update as soon as u possibly can. now this better all get thro or i will NOT b a pleasant person 2 b around!!!
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Title: 1st thanx 4 reviewing my story
Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 00:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not a fan of YYH but i adore kurama. so lemme c, kagome, vampires, kurama. 3 of my favorite things put 2gether in 1 piece. im very impressed w/ this piece of work n i look 4ward to the next chappie... man i hope kaggie kills kikyo, hate that woman beyond all reason. newa
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: darkness_of_the_night [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 21:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A SET UP!!!!!HOLD CRAP!what a trator of a friend!i hope kagome kills her!!!!lol i love your story so please update as soon as humanly possible!!!!thats all for know bye!
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Reviewed By: Sunnisha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 12:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
cool...please keep updating! ^^
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Reviewed By: Hieis_koi14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 23:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic, i love it! please update soon.
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Title: ffarg-Chapter 3 Bloody Fangs
Reviewed By: misslady [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 03:07 CDT
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This is very good for a vampire story. Those are hard to find!! Please keep up the good writing. I would suggest though that you read through and check the grammar and some of the words that might need to be changed to ones that would sound better. Definitely help from a good beta would make this story flow better but I love the whole concept of it and look forward to reading more. Keep up the good work!! Misslady
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Title: FFRG Review Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 13:09 CDT
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This was an interesting, albeit short, chapter. I rather felt that Kagome was a little off in characterization--she seemed much more cynical than she truly is. Claustrophobia is spelled that way ... other small errors that could be caught with the aid of a good, solid beta would help the small things that detract from your writing. The short, choppy sentences can be effective if used sparingly. Overuse leads to annoyance. Overall I'd say your dialogue was strong, and it was obvious that you took care when writing, as the only glaring error that struck me right away was the aforementioned misspelling of claustrophobia. Good, solid start otherwise! Thank you for submitting to FFRG!
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Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 01:43 CDT
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this is really different from most crossovers... but i like it!!! its very creative plz update it asap
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Reviewed By: Sunnisha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 12:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmm...Kagome's Anita and Kurama's Jean-Claude? Songo's Katherine, and Rin is that other girl. ^_^ I like the way you changed it around. Keep you the good work! And update soon.
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