| "Burdens of Growth" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: it's good
Reviewed By: MonkeyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really getting a kick out of this one. I hope you plan to continue. :)
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Reviewed By: Miss_Washu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You Really need to write the next chapter. THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!
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Reviewed By: Chonic On: May 28, 2005 03:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite good epsecially in the BB/RA and RO/SF thing. cant wait for the next chapter. hope u make a new chapter
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Title: hewwo^^
Reviewed By: randomravenfan On: April 21, 2005 21:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
wanna update soon please! it's good and i wanan read more! plus.... the rae/bb idea is cute, perhaps have star walk in on them or something and ask questions...
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Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 13:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awsome write more please.
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Title: um
Reviewed By: JF_girl On: February 02, 2005 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
it could of been a little less focused on the sexual arrousments i know you rated it R but com on now it is good writing and i like it exceptp for some parts
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Reviewed By: elisa ang On: January 31, 2005 20:27 CST
Comment/Review:
this is good, keep it up
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