Reviewed By: iamfanboy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2002 16:40 CST
Comment/Review:
Yowza!
The first Ushio & Tora fic I've ever read (and that's saying something, believe you me!) and I'm very impressed with this.
The story was paced well.
The description flowed.
There were a couple of speling errorrs in the first chapter, but nothin' minor.
You sometimes have two people speaking in the same paragraph in the earlier chapters as well, and that's a NO-NO, but... I'll let it slide for now.
And I agree with you about ending projects. Of course, an end HAS to come, but... does it have to come so soon?
Gonna go look at your other stories now! |
