| "To Remember You" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: inuchick(it never tells me when i log out!UGH!) On: March 30, 2005 11:09 CST
Comment/Review:
It's really goood I think that you should keep writing!
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Title: Awesome plot
Reviewed By: jacketslacker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 04:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the direction you took with the story. I hope you get enough reviews to post the ending. I think I have an idea of how it will turn out, but then again you could always surprise us. Exceptional detail with the story by the way, you really get into it that's for sure.
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Reviewed By: sesshy_lil_slut [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi hi its Sesshy_lil)slut! NICE FIC! I'm 13 too! well 13and 1/2. HOW CAN U NOT LIKE SHIPPO! HOW CAN U LIKE KOUGA, HE'S SO FUDGING ANNOYING!!. i READ YOUR STORYAND WANT TO SAY THAT I'M 13 AND PUT A LEMON(SORT OF) IN MY STORY! good job any how!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inuyashasgirl987654321 On: February 12, 2005 03:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaassssssssseeeeeeee Update! I love this story. I wanna see the third movie, too badly. Anyway, your story was great and update ASAP! And ALWAYS remember: FLUFFINESS ROXXXXX!!!!
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Title: Wow....
Reviewed By: Sango1on1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 01:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...that was really good. I LUVED IT! Now, r u EVER going 2 update? *laughs feebly* I WUVED IT WUVED IT WUVED IT! oh yea, happy Valitines Day. ^_^
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Title: *Your story totally rocks!!!!*
Reviewed By: IYlover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow....OMG!!! I Really have to say that your fic is sooo cool! I really love it! espesially the luv triangle of Kagome, Inuyasha, and Tutsuya. Honestly, I think it's pretty smart of you to show how Inuyasha probably felt and all that shit when he was in-between Kagome and Kikyo. Must be hard for Kagome with the way she feels now that she is seriously in-between Inuyasha and his reancarnation. I think you had a little trouble with the spelling and other grammer, but other than that, your story ROCKS!! I Swear this fic is awesome! Keep up the good work and PLEASE BY ALL MEANS, TRY TO UPDATE AS SOON AS U CAN!!!! MAN I AM DYING TO READ THE REST! PLEASE UPDATE! By the way, I know exactly what u mean. NEW YORK CITY IS THE BESTS PLACE EVER!
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Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: JoJoZ [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 15:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! Your story is great! Very suspenseful, I couldn't stop reading! Some parts are a bit confusing. For example, when the second earthquake hits, and Inu Yasha and Kagome are in the movie theater, why does he bring her all the way to the coast? You didn't really explain that very clearly and that left me a little lost. You also have a tendency to jump from scene to scene, instead of making a smooth transtion. Not always, but sometimes. Also, Im not quite familiar with the whole Inuyasha saga. Maybe you can write a prolouge informing your readers of how these characters came to be... Your story is great though! Very captivating and imaginative. Excellent descriptions of suroundings and characters. You seem to know a lot about Japanese culture. I also noticed you threw in many American references, (Hot cocoa, Viva la Bam, eggs and bacon) Maybe you can try to be more authentic and stick to the Japanese culture.(Just a bit of constructive criticism!) It was pretty funny as well; I especially enjoyed the grandfather's spider scare! Couldn't stop laughing! I encourage you to pursue your writing and expand your thoughts and ideas. Research all and everything you can to make your story engulf the reader even more that you already did. You are a very gifted writer, don't give up!!! :) P.S.-Your little brother sounds like a funny guy, and your sister is absolutely gorgeous!
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Title: Morlana
Reviewed By: Morlana [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 13:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Just found your story and am liking it a lot. Keep up the good work cause I can't wait to see what you do next.
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Reviewed By: PuppySweet On: November 28, 2004 13:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo, i have to know what happenes!!! Please, please, please write more soon!!
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Reviewed By: kagomeinuyashafan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o0o0o it's wonderful!!!plz i need more...*looks @ how many reviews there are*O.O WAT!!!U DAMNN PPL BETTER REVIEW THIS FIC!!!!!!!!(( p.s. wud it b 2 much 2 ask that u read and review my fics InvincibleInuYasha?))
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Title: Inu and Kagome rule!
Reviewed By: trysten On: November 19, 2004 17:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic. U did an awesome job, keep it up. I cant wait till u finish it, I really want to see what happens. This was just soo cute! Inuyasha and Kagome RULE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Mandy223 On: November 13, 2004 00:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great keep up with the great work!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Akira139 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 00:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hope that you can post more. it feels like its going to be a great story!
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