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| "Costume Jewelry" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Title: My Gods . . . . .
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: October 02, 2005 00:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Every time you write a new chapter for this, that's what I think. I'm speechless, this is so true to her character, much truer than what really went down in the anime. I mean, it's all there, all of those qualities are there in her. When you read this study of her, it's like, "Oh yeah, she WOULD act like that." It's as if the thoughts are always at the back of your mind, you know she's like this from the manga, she acts like this in the anime, so you know she's like this but you don't think about it. It's as if Mai suddenly becomes 2-D in fanfic, so even though this is all common sense, it's a splash of cold water in the face to remind you just how 3-D Mai is. Really, this is wonderful. PS: I'm on a comp that makes me fill in all fields.
| Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: February 25, 2005 19:13 CST
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Ah, I still like this. You've captured Mai's mindset beautifully.
| Title: There are many reasons why people wouldn’t review . . .
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: November 28, 2004 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I said it before, and I'll say it again, people can get busy [that's what took me so long]. But that's probably not why people aren't reviewing this. More likely it's that, people don't know what to say. There's nothing to critique, and what good would it do you to gush? [Besides boosting your ego, that is?] All I can really say is that, it fits her, and I agree with your Author Notes. It's what you said it would be, a character study, an insight to how you think Mai thinks. And it fits, it sounds like her voice. I never really asked too much about her past, but this got me thinking on it. In retrospect, I wonder why I didn't think about her past sooner. So I guess all I can close with is, thank you for doing this piece, it got me thinking about her. Oh, and it's good to see that in this "study" she ended up with Jou, and that the Monsters can visit from the "Beast Lands". And one last thing, you're not a review whore, you just want to know if other people are enjoying this too. I'm the same way, I write for myself, but like to know that others get a kick out of it too. That, and reviews let you know where your strength and weaknesses are. -.-;; Bah, sorry I'm not being helpful.
| Reviewed By: Dark Wind On: November 21, 2004 08:24 CST
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Good. Very good. I like this about Mai. It's really clever. I think the portrayal is really accurate to her character. She would write something like that, she's that kind of girl. *feels empowered now* I wanna go kick duelist ass now.... Maybe I will....
be I | Reviewed By: Dark Wind On: November 21, 2004 08:17 CST
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HA! *cheers* Told you I'd find it. *waves* Anyway... Yes, a little strange from what I'm used to seeing you write, but neat nonetheless. I liked the line about harpies kicking sexist ass. *giggles* That was good. *off to review next chapter*
| Reviewed By: Lily Fairy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 11:01 CST
Comment/Review:
yo, um major weirdness, but still funny
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