Title: FFRG Review
Reviewed By: Wolf in the Night [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 01:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you for submitting to FFRG! "Meaningless Fluff" indeed. Small and sweet. However, I caught that you don't always use same verb-agreement throughout the whole sentence. It was something all fans of Dragon Knights could enjoy, newer to vets. This wasn't something made for in-depth analysis of characters, so I can't say much about that. It's something to be enjoyed and taken at face value. The setting could've used some more description, and what each character looked like. Very nice, though. The flow wasn't jarred very much, and the readers get what they pretty much want if they bothered to read the title. Thank for submitting to FFRG, and we hope you do so again!
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