Reviewed By: Anime4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fair. I thought it was kind of intresting, but you didn't seem to put your best effort into this. It's more like you spliced it together, there is little plot development. If you are going to write a story, you should put your all into it, otherwise there is no point. And your were rather repatative in your wording. But it's not bad, with a little work, you could make it better.
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