| "a love story" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Huh?
Reviewed By: Good_Aim On: April 06, 2005 12:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is not really a Hamtaro fic. If it was, then it wouldn't have a "King and Queen" on it. The others was right. Try again and make sure it's good.
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Title: Umm, pardon me, but...
Reviewed By: Stan the Man On: March 21, 2005 08:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate to say it, but that story really wasn't that good. It was difficult to tell what was happening, and it was overall confusing. Why was it posted under Hamtaro anyway?
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Title: uh......ew.....
Reviewed By: Hamtaro_is_mah_homie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
im srry but i have to agree wit 67iy.....that sucked......u have to put more detail....i dint even kno wuth was going on.......if u improve it might be better....but that was one of the worst fics of HAMTARO i ever read........it dint even mention Hamtaro or Laura.....so.......get a better story line....
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Reviewed By: 67iy On: February 11, 2005 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.o......-_______- That was terrible..
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