| "Unlovable Schemer, chapter 4 (unedited)" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Red Dragon Of Egypt [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 01:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BRAVO encore encore BAD YUGI how could you go and marry that fucking two timing bitch sheesh and for WHAT a crush? oh Yugi come on kid crushes last barely a week besides she'll be so fucking deep in debts and bills with her dancing dream she wont have any time for you for one AND she only wants you cause she wants Yami pfft anyone with half a brain can see that plus Kaiba is so much BETTER he stays in ONE place and travels every now and then to be sure but its not going to leave a freakin black whole in his pocket if he does he's not trying to buy you silly he's trying to give you what you deserve a man of your quality a gem amoung gems deserves the life of gems not stuck in some backwater slum in NYC where you'll be lucky you dont get mugged the moment you set foot into what we here in the US dub the CONCRETE JUNGLE it will tear you to shreds Yugi huh ok I'm done ranting now anyways keep up the SUPERB job Soli and Get Xpyne out here I love the adult flare this has :P all thats needed now is some chapagne and sultry slow adult music and boom true swave atmosphere oh and update asap and ever heard of a story called One Night in Bangkok I believe its called if you enjoy writing stuff like this then that stories right up your ally it can be found on AFF.net or you can use the name Edmondia gtg now JA NE
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Reviewed By: vampire lips [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 10:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I am so glad you posted this. It is very well written. And Shut up you are very good at this kinda thing. so HAH! um...well love always,Autumn.
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Title: A+++
Reviewed By: Brittney On: January 20, 2005 05:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was amazing! That really just helped me jump back on the Yu-Gi-Oh bandwagon!!! THANKS GUYS!
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Reviewed By: Niffe_24 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 21:14 CST
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*Giggle* That was really funny, and yes I was awwing as well. ^_^
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Reviewed By: The Panasonic Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 13:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loooove this story!!!!! And the lemon was great! Your lemons always are! I'm glad you're back! I'm waiting for more!!!! ~Pana
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Title: oOOOoooh YEAH!!
Reviewed By: Renee the Rabid Squirrel (too lazy to log in) On: November 14, 2004 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_________________^ Wonderful work there m'dear! I am loving this story to bits and pieces, and yes, I do like your lemons. They are quite well done and, like citrus usually is, refreshing. I love the concept of this story so much! Way to go!
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Reviewed By: D. Motomiya (who's too lazy to log in...) On: November 14, 2004 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*jaw drops* You were worried that was bad? THAT WAS GREAT!!! It's nice to have a new story from one part of my favorite author duo! Please keep up the good work. ^__^
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Reviewed By: daina On: November 14, 2004 07:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O____O Holy fucking christ. Why wasn't I informed of this chapter? I'm just lucky I still have you on author alerts....demo...Where's the rest of the story?? *coughs* Ack, who the hell cares. The best part is right here! Damn, you've gotten good at this while I wasn't looking ~_~ And you just HAD to cut off right before the KaibaXYami lemon, didn't you. Evil, I tell you, EVIL!
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Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotten Candy (Not logged in) On: November 13, 2004 18:43 CST
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GEH! *Glomp* YOU'RE BACKS!! Horrah! *breaks out the party stuff* EVERYONE MISSED YOUS!
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Title: *kills*
Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 16:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Ok, more like hurts badly. YOU! How could y'all? After waiting and waiting for you to update you put in ANOTHER fic? ...I'm gonna read it now. *few minutes later* Umm, Solitaire? You uploaded chapter four...and that's it. I saw Chapter one here a while ago, and it's done. Me confused... I'll give you a proper review when it's all fixed. As for the first chapter...*glomps* Love it! No killing then. Tis a wonderful new fic. I like your characterizations, and the plot, and...and...EVERYTHING! ^_^
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Reviewed By: vampire lips [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 16:35 CST
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! You dont know how happy I am for u 2 to be back. I have been waiting forever. I really thought you forgot about mediaminer. Wow. I didn't even read the chap yet ill go back and read it then tell you what i think. Love for ever and ever ME!
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