| "Losing Grip" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2009 13:39 CST
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this is a good story, i hope to read more soon
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 01:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool please update again soon thank you.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 22:41 CDT
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update sonn. i am curious about her training. and who kagome is going to end up with. i know youko wants to see shippo. i have a feeling she is going to be with kurama.
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Reviewed By: uh... what? On: July 28, 2008 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Proper spelling, grammar, and formatting are your friends. I don't know how anyone can make head nor tails of this. Then again, if you don't know what the story is, how should anyone else? There are plenty of sites online that you can check your grammar and punctuation with. Don't be afraid to use them.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 02:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon. i would like to know who kagome get paired up with. i am curious about the training with genkai. looking for another i hope that comes out soon.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 21:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wheres shippo? please update soon
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Title: HakuTenshi
Reviewed By: HakuTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 17:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*starts chanting* Death to kikyo! or however you spell her damn name. dunno dun care! Kagome and Kurama Pairings are cute! *swt ignore the part above, bribed to type that: bak to my normal talk* Great start! XP! DEATH TO CLAY POTS!
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Reviewed By: Anonymousfanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 01:58 CST
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Wonder what Sesshomaru have to say about Koenma and his Spirit Detective's looking for Kagome. Wonder if Sesshomaru knows about Kikyo's plans to kill Kagome? What will Inuyasha do? Does Kagome really have cousins, or was that an excuse to get rid of Hojo?
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Reviewed By: Kisa Sohma [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 01:54 CST
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Please update real soon.
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Title: um
Reviewed By: kuroykitsunemiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it, but I culdn't understand it. Whereever there was supposed to be either a ' or a ", there was HTML. All the HTML you used showed up like on the song Kagome sand this, ( - ), always showed up. I'm terribly sorry if I sound rude! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 10:48 CDT
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ow.......... my head hurts from trying to read pat all that html coding lol. good story
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Reviewed By: Tsuki-tora(not logged in) On: May 01, 2005 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon!
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Title: CRAZY
Reviewed By: Fox Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 15:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
I KNOW DAMN WELL YOU DON'T PLAN ON UPDATE THIS STORY ONCE A YEAR BITCH. UPDATE THIS MOTHER FUCKING THING.
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Reviewed By: Akiku On: November 13, 2004 22:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job. I tihkn it is a pretty good start! From your demon equal, ~*Komagi Akiku*~
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Reviewed By: Dark Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 21:36 CST
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^^ *does first reviewer dance* Hi this is really good please update soon =D
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