| "Seasons" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 04:53 CDT
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that last line nearly killed me. i love inuyasha's blurted out answer, then his sulkiness when everyone stares at him in shock, followed then by his snarky question of "what? can't i play too". nice flow. and cute game....... which reminds me, kikyou is summer?autumn i could see, but summer? hmm...
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 22:13 CST
Comment/Review:
ok now i feel like a baka,all that stuff I said about spring not following winter thing,please ignore that,it has not been a good day. ^_^;;
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story was absolutly beautiful! I really really loved it! all of the characters are just like they should be,and I loved the whole 'spring will never follow winter' thing,even though winter is my favorite time of year(but not for the same reasons inuyasha has)I really hope you keep writing! ^_^
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 04:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This actually a really beautiful one-shot. The story flowed so well, and your dead-on characterization of the group was flawless. Keep up the good work!
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