| "Fire in the Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Tylec Asroc On: April 11, 2005 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yikes! So many characters, and it's just now in chapter three that I'm beginning to know them all. Your story is fast-paced, and while I can keep up with most of the WHR and Hellsing cast, new characters such as the Nazi group, the two Vatican witches(?)/nuns(?) and the terrorist group Coven just flew right by me. I'm not sure how many of these are original and how many are cannon, but one really need prior knowledge of the series and characters to appreciate such a large cast.
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Reviewed By: Blazer On: February 20, 2005 21:40 CST
Comment/Review:
I thought that orbo has a bad reaction to Robin. It should be not problem for her. But besides that I like hoe things turn out so far.
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Title: Nice Mesh
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 16:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Hellsing and WHR! An appropriate crossover, if I ever saw one. Aside from a few outstanding grammar errors, this was a genuinely interesting first chapter. It was well-written, descriptive without being too wordy, and original.
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Title: Keep it up!
Reviewed By: butterflydragon On: January 20, 2005 23:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow, you've got a great story on your hands...I hope you keep writing it!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 03:02 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow. What a great start. Well finish it. Seems like you have a real good fic on your hands. Keep up the awesome work.
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