| "On a Leash: Emancipated" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: queenserena(OMG! You don't have to be signed in anymore...browser took me out anyway again) On: January 10, 2005 16:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*shrieks*/Rin:Aw! Inu-Yasha-sama's being weird again!/*sigh**huggles Sesshy plushies*How about more Fluffy-chan?/Rin:Fluffy?/Yeah! Sess!/Rin:Ah!*calls over*Sesshô-Maru-sama!/Aw crap!*runs off*/Sesshô-Maru:Yes?/Rin:Rebekuka wanted you!/Sesshô-Maru:I highly doubt it.*wals off*/*peaks*Is he gone?/Rin:Why did you-/Don't start!/Rin:Hey! You're suppose to be writing!/...Never take leisure time with your muse...
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Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 00:14 CST
Comment/Review:
lol! i love them! they're so cute!! ahhh! ^__^ do more, pleease! ^_^ heheh
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: December 05, 2004 21:49 CST
Comment/Review:
*snickers*I think chapter 2 was funny with Inuyasha turn the page back again to the last one.
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 07:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Those were so cute! I couldn't help but smile at InuYasha's refusal to let turn the page. I hope there are more.
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