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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 19:48 CST
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A very good story! I like it, but you need to fix the formating on the last chapter. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou (I'm not logged in....) On: November 23, 2004 14:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! It's good. And I haven't read a Kirara-centered fic before. It's good. Only one more chapter, though? Darn. But, it's good. I likie!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 17:40 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm interested to see where you take this. Please continue. Thanks!
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Title: Chapter One
Reviewed By: RadiosNmyHead [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 15:53 CST
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This seems like a really interesting fic to read. I haven't seen many fics about Kirara, much less one that has her speaking in the first person. I'm really interested to see where you will go with it, and your writing style is pretty good. Update soon!
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