Reviewed By: EternalQueenSerenity [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2007 22:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read all of your chapters so far, and I must say that I do want to read more. The first chapter wasn't written to well, but I'm pleased to say I enjoyed the next few chapters more, even though I could predict what was going to happen, especially with the ball gown. Somehow I had the feeling that it would look like NeoQueen Serenity's dress, even before they went to the mall. Also, I have a feeling she will wear the tiara, and going to the ball looking just like the queen can't be a smart move... However, I want to read it! o.o I love stories like these, so please update ASAP!!!!
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