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"My last Breath" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ]
 Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 06, 2005 19:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, that was great! Great angst. Great anger. I could feel what you intended Yugi to feel from here. I love the song, btw, so that also helps. ^^;;; Seriously, I thought it was awesome! Who cares if it looked short? It got the point across so well. And I also have a songfic of my own that's really short but really powerful. Like yours, except different! XD I liked the repetition of Yugi's words when it was describing what Yami wouldn't feel. It left off in such a perfect place, leaving the mood I know you intended to leave. I'm sorry, I can't stop ranting. The song just fits the moment so well! I never realized it until this fic! I hope to see more writings from you soon! P.S. Do you think you could read my other fics besides "Insanity's Plot"? They're virtually all angst. ^^;;; Arigatou and ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Sakayume [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 21, 2005 16:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, me again. Still love this fic, lol. And! I finally posted that one I was talking about. It's crap, but oh well. I tried and tried to make it better, but then I just said to hell with it and posted it. =P
 Reviewed By: Sakayume [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 22, 2004 18:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Ooh.. I love it! It's funny that we wrote something so similar. XP I like yours though, I'm a sucker for an angsty boylove fic. ^-^ Oh, and thanks so much for reviewing 'Repay You'... that silly fic. I've started another little ficlet, about Yugi watching Yami duel Rafael. It'll be posted soon, if you want to read it.
 Reviewed By: nanayamiyugi [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 22, 2004 16:53 CST
Comment/Review:
that was so sad *cries* well that okay*feels happy agin*
 Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 22, 2004 13:20 CST
Comment/Review:
that was like, so so so sad. I think you made Yugi kinda cruel but I liked that. I'm no fan of really uke hikari's. keep it going

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