| "Vegeta's Recipe For Meatballs" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 22:58 CST
Comment/Review:
hm very funny. I really didn't expect the ending either. The flammer annoys me...oh well lol good job.
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Title: u sucked
Reviewed By: nruff1 On: July 21, 2006 06:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
what the f*** man, what is ur problems u suck dont write ever write, your a disgrace to ever writer,it wasn't even scarry
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Reviewed By: fyrechylde [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 00:02 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
*falls over laughing* It's nice to read a really weird one once in a while... *looks at the idiot flamer person* Wow, you've received the sign. You've been flamed...it's the mark of all great writers!! *wink*
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Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, nu, but I don't see what you've got against this fic, I mean I could understand someone having a.. 'disagreement' with a couple other of this author's fics (they're scary, although I enjoyed them), but I can't understand what is wrong with this one. Anyway, I though this fic was funny, without it being stupidly so (like the 'funny' fic I tried to do *puts bag on head*!) I enjoy reading your stories, I'm going to check out your others.
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Title: WHAT THE F***
Reviewed By: nu On: March 03, 2005 15:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT THE HELL IS YOUR F****** PROBLEM!?! OH HELL NO, YOU DID NOT JUST DO THAT! F*** THIS, YOU HAVE PROBLEMS! STOP WRITING THIS STORY LIKE RIGHT THIS MINUTE. YOU'RE A DISGRACE TO ALL DBZ FANFICTIONS. --
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 18:52 CST
Comment/Review:
awww, poor Veg! That was a surprisingly enjoyable bit! Veg with his face down in the ground beef dreaming of Kakarot! I laughed out loud. Nice narrative throughout, nice descriptions (I liked leaky nursing Bulma at the end of her rope!), genuine humor. *thumbs up* Can't wait to see where this goes.
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