| "Vegeta's Proposal" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Vegeta's Proposal
Reviewed By: mlf On: November 30, 2004 08:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a great story sweet and full of love...
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Title: Vegeta's Proposal
Reviewed By: mlf On: November 29, 2004 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
there is nothing wrong with a little fun in a relationship..me and my husband do silly stuff like that all the time and it's fun (until you get hurt) but the making up part is funn....update ...maria
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Title: "Vegeta's Proposal
Reviewed By: mlf On: November 29, 2004 11:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was nice of vegeta to bring back her car..see he's a good gut..now let's get married and soon.that's if she says YES....
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Title: Vegeta's Proposal:
Reviewed By: mlf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 06:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol i don't want to picture those two in those costumes...that was a great chapter...man this is going to be funn..can't wait for more...maria
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Title: Vegeta's Proposal:
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 08:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm lamo here and i know theres more...lol...happy holidays to you and please update soon...maria
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Title: Vegeta's Proposal: 1. Securing Assistance
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 13:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't wait to read more of this story...very nice and different..please update soon.maria
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