|"Not Growing Up" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]|
| Reviewed By: ArcaJeth [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 17:02 CDT|
I must admit, I loved this episode. Your story captures these two so well. I can even imagine them in a relationship such as this. Thanks for making my day. ::HUGS::
| Reviewed By: Naolin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 02:05 CDT|
Style of Writing: 9 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
I loved it. For one because there's just not enough of this pairing, and for the other because it was well written and fun to read. Yay you.
| Reviewed By: zaitcev [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 20:32 CST|
Well written: perfectly structured; mature, smooth and level language. Yukari making promises "to be friend always" is a small mischaracterization, because she cannot even remember what her students did a year ago for a culture festival. At any rate, Nyamo putting any stock in it certainly is, she's way more intelligent than that. But on the whole, the extension is formally consistent with the source. The overall idea didn't grab me personally.