|"Denial" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ]|
| Reviewed By: Drof On: May 11, 2005 08:34 CDT|
Duuuuuude!!! That's, like....whoa. This story's really awesome. There's a couple typos *if you can, you should probably spell-check it*, but it's not bad. ^^ Two thumbs up, for sure!! Update soon, 'kay?
| Reviewed By: hyskoa On: April 10, 2005 12:43 CDT|
hum... wondering if u r still working on tis piece of work... u should finish it ya know... though d character's a bit off track but i like d character of D count :) u r soooo cruel leave me erm... i mean us waiting well .... where the hack r u ? dun disappear until u finish tis !!! ops sorry got over excited :P
| Title: don't stop! nooo! T_T|
Reviewed By: schwarzekigan On: March 11, 2005 14:18 CST
Style of Writing: 7 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Why'd you stooooooooop?! T__T It was really getting good! Write more! lol. I love how your characters are so much like the real one. You did a fantastic job on the dialgoue! And I think you're right about the story being set in LA...it's kinda scary how much the author knows about us "ignorant american oafs" though XD To conclude, great job and keep up the good work! b^_^b
| Title: info|
Reviewed By: Yami Bakura On: November 30, 2004 17:16 CST
I like your story but I think you should read at least to book four before writing a longer fanfic. Leon is a messy guy and not very charming. D on the other hand is the exact oposite of Leon, he's charming,witty,organized and handsome. your story is really good but I think more info will make this alot better. Keep writing I hope to read some more of your work.