| "How To Say I Love You" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ummmmm well it was really sweet...i must say that there could have been a lot more explanation of where they were and what it look liked..ur grammer as far and spelling is good but a few mistakes that i saw and with the paragraph you spaced them too far away form each other and say when Duo is talking and he does something like gets up from a chair ..well all of that goes in one paragraph..i hope that that makes sense..well good job with what u have.
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Reviewed By: animeotaku418 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 00:39 CST
Comment/Review:
hmm....it was a good story. i liked it. however you shouldnt have the paragraphs so far apart. thats the only mistake i saw! ^^ keep up the writing and check out my stories if you want! ^^
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