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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2013 10:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Yes, alright, but try not to look like prostitute who's turned up at the wrong party." Yes, there are many, many gorgeous men in France, but then again I'm from Britain so the frog's legs looked like eligible bachelors to me. You're going to kill me laughing! |
Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2013 09:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In chapter 4 you used the words "negative screws" was utterly confused and looked it up top results come up with something to do with Ice Screws in climbing. I have a feeling you mean "Slot (flat) Screw" which would look like a negative and the Phillips Screw (the +) is the positive one. I also looked it up on Wikipedia. I feel like such a Nerd. Hurray for proper spelling of things like colour and mum and stuff. |
Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2013 07:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What is with "Ealier" in "72 Hours Ealier" chapter 1's title, shouldn't it be Earlier? |
Reviewed By: Haisha-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2011 18:45 EST
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I know at this point this may be a lost cause, but I really do hope that you decide to continue writing this story. It would mean a lot to your fans (me being one of your biggest fans for sure!) if you would update. I know that whenever I am going through a rough patch, reading your stories always cheers me up and makes me happy. This is far too good of a story to leave unfinished. So... please update! :) :) |
Reviewed By: Forbidden Female Flare [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2010 03:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been thinking that I should write a humongous review to make up for the past reviews on all the other chapters. But I will not. Not because they do not deserve it; BECAUSE THEY DO!! But because I am too lazy. In truth when I started reading your story I was so amused with the A/Ns and Fackyak? (However you spelled it, too lazy to go look.)that i would skip don and read them first, mentally cried when you deprived me of them, then cheered again when i got to read them again. Anyway, I would like to point out a flaw with you time-line. It could not of been eighteen months( that is 1 1/2 for anyone else that reads this bad in math(cause i read other people's reviews sometimes too)) because Kagome was turning 17 in a week where the time jump picks up. That would make an almost complete year. Kagome was sent to Paris a little after her birthday, because she commented on how she was "killed" a week or to before her birthday,when she was still stuck in Inuyasha's flat. And when we go back to her convo with Miroku she says she is turning 17. So Either there was a larger lapse in the main events prior to Paris (which is most likely the case and I read too fast an assumed it was in a closer time span) or you meant to say she was turning 18? Because a year lapse would have past her birthday again (17) and another half year would make her near her up-incoming birthday. If that is confusing just email me and i will try and explain it again more...thoughtfully detailed? Or maybe you could email to explain the time lapse so I could understand your time-lime. Any-who there was something else i wanted to say but I cannot quite remember... Hope you remember to come back on and finish this story. I love your writings I have not been on to do serious readings since your early writings of Dead Famous, 28 Days, Bottled Genius, and the Price of Freedom. I do think your stories are good enough for real publishing. Oh I remember what I was thinking of earlier, well two things now: 1 - that reading this story made me think of reading British Lit. which was fun and different. 1.2 - I also loved when you told off those twits when they gave you a hard time with your style of English by writing that big paragraph to them in VERY English terms, did not understand half of it but it was exultantly, joyous to read. and 2 - Your Story 28 Days reminds me a little bit of the TV show Scrubs, because it is comedy about doctors, most likely. Any-who almost 3 in the morning time to end this review..................................................................... .....................NOW!
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Title: hello????
Reviewed By: tora92 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2008 23:42 EDT
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are you still writing/alive??? the date says its been 2 years since the last update!! and i rele love this story!! T-T *sad face--cries* WHERE HAVE YOU GONE?!!?!!?!
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Reviewed By: shmally [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2008 01:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is this the end?.. I really enjoy your writing. It's the best I've found in a long time.. And that includes my hours in librarys. Looking forword to the rest of your work :D
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Reviewed By: Midnightsilver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 14:22 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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your fics have been the best I've ever read. I look forward to future updates. P.S I'm glad I'm not the only British on this site :)
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: kaglover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2008 20:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've just read the prologue it was surprisingly good. I can't wait to read the next following chapter. Keep up the good work! =]aeqr
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Reviewed By: xoxStArDuStxox [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 19:15 EST
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please tell me that isnt the end of this fic i might die :(
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Title: Zero-G
Reviewed By: Gossip Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 15:50 EST
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Whoa! I can't believe that the great Rozefire hasn't finished this story yet! I totally love it. As well as Dead Famous, Bottled Genius, 28 Days, Soul Exchange, and all those other fics. As Thanksgiving and Christmas are coming up, how 'bout you make a teensy little update for all us poor readers who have been left in the dark? Thanks a bunch! YKYLM, GG
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Reviewed By: Vampire liaison [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 17:32 EDT
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i was just wondering of you are planning to finish this and the other half done stories you wrote. What happened? it looks as thouh you havent written anything in years? why?
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Reviewed By: the evil fluffy muffin queen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 23:31 EDT
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omg why are you taking so lung to update? no, screw that... i know exactly why. its cause you write like 100 words a minute, and only spend one minute writing out of 20... or something like that. but whatev. please update really soon! i so have to know whats gonna happen. its a great story... kagomes life is so sad. i like angsty stories... well i hope you arent seick anymore... or dead OMG DONT BE DEAD!!! lol i think im high... nvm... please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: alloreli [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 17:31 EDT
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Are you going to update soon??? Please!!!! I want to find out the end of the story!!! And please update Autumn Bane!
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 06:03 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story sooooo much!!!! :D The plot twists really keep us on our toes (and I love the Fackyews!) Update as soon as you are able. Ican't wait for the next chapter!! *gets all giddy with excitement*
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