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"Demonic Guardians" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ]
 Title: Updates
Reviewed By: WhiteTigress [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 09, 2005 22:57 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*cries* Why won't you update????? I've been waiting very patiently. Pleeeeeeeeeeeease???
 Reviewed By: stix  On: September 18, 2005 17:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
i loved this story. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
 Reviewed By: Kurama_Lover999  On: February 16, 2005 21:26 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR STORY!! I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE
 Reviewed By: Samantha  On: January 24, 2005 15:12 CST
Comment/Review:
It depends on when in the series you are for Yu Yu Hakusho. If it's after the Sensui insident, then yes. Kurama can transform at will should he need it and Yusuke is half-demon so he can transform into his demon form at will too. Hiei also.
 Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 09, 2005 16:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Bane's the one that wanted Harry to die.
 Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 08, 2005 12:39 CST
Comment/Review:
1. Does Kurama have the ability to change to his Youko form at will? No, though many people like to write it that way, he has to have exposure to the Fruit of the Past Life, it happens to him when it's a mist and as a liquid. 2. What was the name of that centaur guy who came to teach Divination in the fifth book? errrrrrrrr, *think hard* Firenze. Yeah, I'm certain that's his name 3. Did the book mention whether or not the centaur planned on staying to teach or if he decided to teach for a year and quit the job? Yes, he can't go back to the forest, Ron commented that he would probably teach alongside with Trelawny. You update pretty fast, compared to some other people, so don't worry. Thank you!
 Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 08, 2005 10:32 CST
Comment/Review:
RabidFangirl101 is right, although there are a few more details. Kurama can transform when he goes under intense emotional stress, as seen later in the series. And, according to Japan's kitsune legends, they gain power at the sickle and full moons, and I've read some stories where Kurama doesn't have to fully transform on the sickle moons as he does on the full moons. And the centaur's name is Bane, I believe. Not sure. I love your story, and I hope you update really, really soon. Your story is what got me hooked on YYH/HP stories, and now I'm even writing one of my own. Thanks!!! ^_^
 Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 08, 2005 00:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Nope, Kurama doesn't have the power to change his form at will - however, you as the author can give him the power as long as you give it a sutiable explanation and prescense in the plot. Can't remember anything 'bout the centuar... so your outta luck there. But I'm curious as to how your going to play around with this story... this plot is over-used, but I'm interested to see what sort of twist you'll use...
 Title: good good
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 22, 2004 17:47 CST
Comment/Review:
i cant wait for the rest of it please keep going
 Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 05, 2004 12:36 CST
Comment/Review:
^_^
 Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 04, 2004 18:24 CST
Comment/Review:
GREAT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I really hope you continue. You're officially on my favorites list!!! ^_~

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