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| "Punishment" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Lisha Lane
Reviewed By: sohmas_are_great [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it, but I noticed one thing. Tohru and Uo met Hana when they were in middle school. She didn't know the Sohmas then, or at least wasnt friends with them, so she wouldn't be talking to Yuki. Other than that, it was a great fic!
| Title: Lisha Lane
Reviewed By: sohmas_are_great [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 14:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it, but I noticed one thing. Tohru and Uo met Hana when they were in middle school. She didn't know the Sohmas then, or at least wasnt friends with them, so she wouldn't be talking to Yuki. Other than that, it was a great fic!
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