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"Inner Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Title: Nice Poetry
Reviewed By: Manuel R. Zavala  On: March 11, 2005 23:36 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very nice indeed, Riku's view of DARKNESS. Not my way of seeing Riku's view of darkness but it was still good. You did a very good job. Though it could of use more feelings to it. No offense but Riku is really feeling bad about the darkness. Finish playing Kingdom Hearts and play Kingdom Hearts: Chain of Memories. By playing them you would understand how Riku felt because you can now use him in a story line. And once again, Good Job ;)
 Reviewed By: Anime_fan_supreme [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 22, 2004 17:27 CST
Comment/Review:
I loved your poems! ^__^ They were very good.

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