| "Emotionless" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Great job!
Reviewed By: Inflame The Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very touching fic. It brought tears to my eyes! (FYI: Not alot of stuff does that.) Anyway that is like my fav GC song so extra points for a good song! Also I'm very sorry for your loss. Keep your chin up and keep writing!!
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Title: you gotta death wish?
Reviewed By: jenny fleming On: April 06, 2005 07:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it!! please add some more to it. you really have a grate storey line to it and i would love to hear the rest if it. if you could please send me the next chapter (if it's finished) to me please at queenbich_2000@hotmail.com i would really appreatiate it!! from jenny.
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Title: ..............................................
Reviewed By: A.P. On: March 20, 2005 12:31 CST
Comment/Review:
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Title: roxxy
Reviewed By: roxxy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2005 11:28 CST
Comment/Review:
brilliant brought tears to my eyes and im sorry for your loss
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Title: ......
Reviewed By: RiseFromThyAshes On: March 19, 2005 03:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, it had loads of grammer and spelling mistakes. Maybe you should put it through spell check then check it over again yourself? Next, you basically just told us what people were feeling. Sometime that is fine, but the ohter half of the time you should try and show emotion not just write something like, "She was sad." This story overall just seemed really fake and not that realistic.
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Reviewed By: LysergRaine [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 17:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi I am Alyssa and I just wanted to say great story and I am sorry for your lose well I got to go see ya ^ ^ V P.S. I am really sorry for your lose Bye-Bye
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Reviewed By: monkeyray9 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 09:28 CST
Comment/Review:
you have great writing talent and should be proud of that fact...keep on writing! ~@~monkeyray9~@~
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