| "The Proposal" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: kane shi megami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 05:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never laughed this hard! Great story and I like how Yamcha ISN'T the bad guy.
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Reviewed By: BobbyV On: May 04, 2005 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
LOL!! too funny. the flowers, chocolates, PMS!? LOL
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Reviewed By: Jackialioncourt On: February 28, 2005 23:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOLOL...huracan Carla, allergies, poor flowers, poor Trunks......PPPPPOOOOOOR Veggie-Chan...lolol FUnniest DBZ FF EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 08:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Too bad "Hurricane Carla" didn't get that annoying Bulma out of the picture for good. Hilarious fic! I laughed until my sides hurt!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 20:03 CST
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YES! You write Yamcha right! I got a big ole smile on my face when I started this story and saw my Yammie was going to figure prominently! This was a wonderfully funny fic, and I was sure it was going to win the contest on sheer likability alone. "I seek to appease her anger." I can just hear Vegeta saying that. A great Vegeta-negotiates-he-weird-human-world fic! I loved it, and so did everyone who read it for the contest.
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 09:59 CST
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I smiled thoughtout this whole fic. It's classic thwart Vegeta humor at its best. It's always fun to read Vegeta coping with Human Life and you do it better than most. There's a little bit more reality there, not just "pick on Vegeta". And of course, I always love a Yamcha being difficult, but not an A-hole.
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