| "Letting Go" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: goth _chick [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
you were just mimmicing 13 going on 30 and thats just stupid!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InvincibleInuYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 12:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Um, maybe you should write a disclaimer saying that this plot line is pretty muich the same as that movie, 13 Going On 30. You just changed the names and stuff. Just a little hint of advice so nobody bugs you later. But yea, I hope you make this story interesting, it's gonna be cute!
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 11:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
um..its definitely original alright...but isn't this supposed to be a fan fic which EVERYONE can enjoy? ...no offense or anything, but this 'fanfic' sounds like you're trying to flatter yourself with the fantasy of having inuyasha as your bf or sumthen and making kagome look like a bad guy cos ure jealous....w.e.
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