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| "Dance With Death" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: SuperSanne [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 09:21 CST
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I know it's been a while, but I still hope you will update someday, This story is to great to be abandoned!
| Reviewed By: Arya_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 18:21 CDT
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Aww, chapter 16 was so sweet! Please update soon!!! ^___^
| Reviewed By: Arya_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEEEEEEEEEE!!! I read this story while it was still on ff.net, and I was sooo disapointed when it was taken off. I'm so happy you reposted it!! -does happy dance- EEEEE!! I haven't read chapter 16 yet, but if it's the last chapter then...=(, but if it isn't then UPDATE!!! YAYAYAY! Sorry, I'm just so excited that it's back! X3 This story is so AWESOME!! I am such a sucker for cell and oc romances! Go you! Don't ever get discouraged! And did I mention how much I love this story? EEEE!! X3!!!
| Reviewed By: Kieri [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 10:46 CDT
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If there was a category called "Great Fics Ignored Because They're Not Bulma/Vegeta PWP," this would be one of the top ones. You've done a wonderful job of character development, storytelling (complete with terrific descriptions and action!), and kept me watching for your latest update. It's good to see Cell's implanted motives challenged, and Comet is both a well-written and interesting OC, which you don't see every day. The imagery you've used, such as the Church, was very easy to visualize and just plain creepy. You've also got what appears to be a well-thought out plot -- a marvel in fics these days! I've added your fic to the DBZ Salon library, and hope more readers find it. Good luck and I can't wait to see the next installment!
| Reviewed By: Evanscent [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 23:53 CDT
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No reviews? What, did you delete them? Ahem. I really, really enjoyed this fic. Your characters are well drawn, believibly in character and easily understood. The romance is good, too. This is an original idea, and that's my favorite part! You've pulled this off and you've done it well. I am impressed! Perhaps more background on Comet would be nice. How did she get to be so strong? Krillin trained for years to become what he is. I like how Cell's a tortured soul. Could we see more of his suffering and reasoning? Maybe more of his confusion between all the types of "things" he is? I really look forward to the next update. I'm hooked! Great job.
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