| "Never Take Hiei to a Carnival" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: white_ninja_hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 18:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
PHUNNI PHUNNI PHUNNI!!!! i wonder what hiei really would be like on a sugar high
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Reviewed By: nhamot [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 14:56 CST
Comment/Review:
sugar!!! bloodbaths and lots of jucy humans to drink from!!!! give him mooooooooorrreeeee sugar and let him run wild somemore!!!! bring yukina in and put her in danger so he'll calm down enough to save her and let him go wild again!!! um... that's all i have to say on this matter... so... um, good job!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Rose Red Kistune On: January 26, 2005 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that the story was plain out wonferful. ^_^ I laughed, it was great fun beond all. My friends and myself are crazed with Kurama/Hiei fictions. It doesn't matter weather it's romantic or not. Personaly, I loved it. The part when Kitty licking Kurama's wound clean was cunning itself. When Kurama Pointed To his lips and laughed, I can see that happening. GREAT WORK! I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work. If it's also laugh out loud funny, or a K/H... I'd LOVE to write a review again. Wonderful, Just wonderful. IT's great, I'm telling you, you havta read this.
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Narihika [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 00:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was Totally awsum! Even though i think u should have put sweet snow aka ice cream in it to,But it was still awsum!
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