| "Seridas" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
Title: Dear Kiyumi
Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 12:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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I know you will update soon,but I hope you do it really soon. I miss talking to you and i MISS READING YOUR STORIES! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!;_;
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Title: Still sad
Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 14:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im just hope you update soon. I like your story a lot you know that. The story you ade up is awesome. I just hope you update again.:cry:
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Title: 'sad'
Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 11:46 CST
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Hey wazzup. I hope you update soon and I hope you have time. -_-
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 12:01 CST
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Um Kiyumi what is lacrosse?
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Reviewed By: ~HiEi LoVeRs~ On: January 27, 2005 20:26 CST
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Hey it's alright. We'll wait. It might be hard, but I'll try. I'm not very patient, but when it comes to friends and things like this I can wait. You still need some time to relax after your finals so I'll be good.
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Reviewed By: HiEi_JaGaN_JaGaNsHi On: January 26, 2005 19:57 CST
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I really hope you update soon. I kinda getting tired of waiting. But I will always be by your side.
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 18:45 CST
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C'mon update. Please. You haven't updated for about two to three months now. I really hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 10:17 CST
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See I told ya I would get other people to review. I just asked/emailed some people to read and review your story. I hope you are happy Youkosgirl37. I did this all for you I got different reviewers to read and review your story. Well, I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kazumewa_Puipor _ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 09:15 CST
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Reviewed By: Animefreak11 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 22:46 CST
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YAY truth or dare!!!!!!! *dances around happily* sorry i'm a little *cough*alot*cough* hyper.... i watched.... 3 dvds of magic knight rayearth... it just happens that this guy is really cute.... ^^U anyway.... wheeeeee must go watch more while waiting for an update!!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: Animefreak11 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 22:41 CST
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need ideads heh??? ^^U sorry wrong person to ask... subconscious: oh come on u know u have too much imagination! me: shhhh! be quiet! >< i don't have enough for this great story!!!! ^^U one more chap to go! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Animefreak11 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 22:39 CST
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lol well i read this on a request by.... someone i don't really know but i suppose you do... the e-mail adress is something like... jennifer something ^^U oh well i'm glad i read it! It's really good! me off to read more!
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Reviewed By: akumi_higurashi On: January 21, 2005 21:23 CST
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Like oh yeah like I hope like good luck like on your like finals and like I really like wish you like luck.
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Reviewed By: ~bob~ On: January 21, 2005 21:20 CST
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Hey wazzup I like your story and I want you to update as soon as possible. I'm a boy if you think I'm gay just because I'm a fan Kurama well you think wrong I'm not gay. Just update.
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Reviewed By: akumi_higurashi On: January 21, 2005 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like OMG like I so like like this story like you like have to like update like soon. Like I like like this story like so much like you have got like to update you like got to like you got to.
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 18:44 CST
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Hey can you tell me what you got on your finals I really want to know. C'mon you have got to update(sorry for changing the subject so fast I'm really good at that)soon. My real name is Jennifer,Jen, or Jenny. I don't care. But please you have got to update soon.
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 22:36 CST
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I'm with you you all the way and this is what I told someone if you wish for something and you want it badly or you want to do it badly well think about it cause sometimes wishes could come true and could cause trouble so be careful of what you wish for if you wish to pass your finals and not study or something and cheat than that is cheating and that might just happen if you really wish, but think it over before you act. ^_^
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Reviewed By: hiei_jagan_jaganshi On: January 15, 2005 16:52 CST
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See I told you you'll have other reviewers...oops...^___^ I guess I revield my secret. ^_^ Well the reason I am using this name is because I am not logged in and they will not let me use my username so that is why so it's me, but in a different name. ^^ Sorry if I got your hopes up. -_-
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Reviewed By: hiei_jagan_jaganshi On: January 15, 2005 16:47 CST
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Hey thanks for the note. I will wait. I wish you luck on your finals. I really do. I like it cause know one has ever let me be in the story unless the stories that you're suppose to insert yourself in, but you let me be a character in it and let me choose my own personality my own things. That is one reason why I love your story. ^^ There are more reasons, but it will be really long so I think not. 0/////0
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on YoukosGirl34 your story is great. I love it. It's so cool. So cool. I put it first for my favorite list. I really want you to update. For me? Please? I really like your story and you are giving up. Come on don't give up keep going. I like it and if I like it then sooner or later someone other than me will like it and review so update soon. ^_^
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Title: will update soon
Reviewed By: YG34 On: January 12, 2005 14:02 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey hiei's lover i will update as soon as i can, i'm right in the middle of my finals for school and i won't be updating for awhile, i'm really sorry, i will update next wek for sure! c ya!
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 20:00 CST
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Hey can you update soon? I really like this story and it seems like no one other than me is reviewing. Please update soon really soon. Please. Good luck. Don't give up.
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 13:24 CST
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This really is a great story and I read it over and over because it's full of action and adventures so please update soon. ^_^
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 19:33 CST
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Do you remember when I added a little more details on another review well I only meant the forbidden angel okay. ^_^ okay. ^_^
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 19:31 CST
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It was just GREAT! Hope ya update soon and I forgot to tell ya another one of my weapons they're called ninja stars. I guess it just slipped my mind when I was making a form. Please update PLEASE?
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 16:00 CST
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THAT WAS SO COOL! Hope ya update soon and please tell what am I supose to put in chapter file name and update really soon please *puppy dog eyes* so please update and give some advice on my story. ^_^
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 19:37 CST
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TYPE:*just if you really want to know*forbidden child and forbidden angel *made it up* so I am a demon last of my type many demons are after me for my power.
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 16:51 CST
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Okay thanks for the little note and that porposion you gave me I will take it. NAME:Akumi Himaru AGE:? HEIGHT:4'1 HAIR: longer than shoulder blades pitch black and always ties a high ponytail POWERS:shadows,fire,ice,light ABILITIES:has a jagan implanted on forhead to see future past and telepathy and a second eye on the palm of right hand it could get a sample of anyone's power when you touch them with that hand controls dragon of fire and ice*just made up*dragons are on both left and right arm. PERSONALITY:like hiei's but a bit nicer PAST:like hiei's but worse CLOTHES:always wearing black fighting kimono and black coat like hiei's EYES:left eye bloody red right eye crimson TYPE:1/4 dark angel 1/4 light angel 1/4 koorime 1/4 fire apparition WEAPONS:katana,bow and quiver of arrows,daggers,and kunai's FAVORITE FOOD:none QUOTE:hn ACESSORIES:necklace with a dragon with a red eye WEIGHT:lite as a feather SPEED:faster than Hiei's
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 11:59 CST
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I hope you update soon and I just noticed that I was thee only one reviewing. But I like your story and tell us what the pairings are. Even if the pairings are going to be Kiyume and kurama *which I really hate because I hate Kurama* I will still read and review so please update soon for me *puppy dog eyes* ^_^
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 22:17 CST
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