| "Fulfillment" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: quicken On: September 19, 2005 08:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
First time I've read a threesome, and it was a bit strange but I guess it works.
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Reviewed By: me On: June 04, 2005 14:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
you should write a sequal
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Reviewed By: Yuri&YaoiFAN On: February 12, 2005 12:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT! You are a fantastic writer. I was dampening before the story even got to the sex part. Incredible work. Hope to read more from you soon.
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 00:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yummy i luv it u NEED 2 write another 1 lol kyo naked yummy lol poor kagura she waz so used lol o well i liked tohru in this 1 she acted like me- uh i mean............. she acted the exact opposite of me (cough cough) lol ne wayz i luv it write another and kyo iz soooooooooooooooooooooooooo damn sexy it hurts (pictures kyo naked *drools and passes out extremely horny) (wakes up) uh well i hav something to take care of so sayonara, ja ne, goodbye (rushes 2 da bathroom)
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Reviewed By: cytosis24 On: January 14, 2005 03:53 CST
Comment/Review:
wow! that was so intense. That was a deliciously wicked Tohru. Would you write another?
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Reviewed By: yeeha gal On: January 14, 2005 03:51 CST
Comment/Review:
so tasty... another one please!
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