| "How Could You Say That?!?!" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great chapter update... really liked it... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 03:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was funny what was the mother of all chick flixs?
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Reviewed By: Prepbaby On: March 26, 2005 21:07 CST
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I like really liked it!!! Good like story!!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: physcho_bitch [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, the ending was soo cute. I was a little confused at some parts, only because you seemed to be mixing present tense and past tense words, but for the most part, it was very well written! I hope that you can start another story, I'll be looking forward to it! The two things I would focus most on are "tense" (past, present, future) agreement and more explanatory writing with lots more detail to help lengthen the story. I loved it, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Wolfgrl1880 On: March 13, 2005 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I think that your doing a good job with your story so far. I think that you should make the chapters a little longer and put in a little more detail. Other than that I think that you are doing a fine job. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: babyinu On: March 09, 2005 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello i really liked your story please write more soon pretty please ....oh and i just wanted to let you know *grins evily* my birthday was yesterday and it would be really really reallly really really 3 hours later really really really nice if you wrote a chapter for meee hahaha just kidding but keep up the good work!
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Title: Wow *chapter blows Phsycho away through window*
Reviewed By: physcho_bitch [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 18:45 CST
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Wow, the thing that Kagome said about how she knew that they would make it through the battle, that really rang true. You hit the nail on the head there, I mean, mostly in anime's you feel as though the protagonists are invincible, and so it comes as a shock if, for example, they loose. That's what I really admire in your writing: your chapters may be short and to the point, but your characterization is great and so are the themes that you include in each of your updates. Thank you so much for such a great chapter! -Phsycho P.S. Please, if you have a chance, check out chapter 22 of Simple and Clean, and review ( I hope this isn't asking too much! ), I think you'll really enjoy it! ^^ good job, keep updating, you have alot of promise as a great writer!
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Title: Hmmm...
Reviewed By: physcho_bitch [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 23:14 CST
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Uggh. Please, please don't make this cute fic into something as vulgar as a lemon!!! Anyways, it was really cute, keep up the good work!
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: physcho_bitch [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 16:11 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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^^ I love Kagome's mom. Teehee, she's so devilishy evil and no one knows it. Your friend Shelley, is her last name Smith? Because if it is... *cracks knuckles menacingly* she has some explainin' to do... though, it doesn't really sound much like her ^^;; P.S. Please do something about the underlined things, they are really, really distracting (no offense)!
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Title: Yay! I love it!
Reviewed By: physcho_bitch [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Wow, I really like your style of writing! You got the characters personalities dead on and your humor is great. I think, though, to make the story easier to read you should use quotes ("") instead of underlining when people are talking, or else it gets a little confusing. I love your writing though, it's great fun and really entertaining! I especially love sango ^^
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Title: ?
Reviewed By: StalkerBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good update really soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!! soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! soooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: StalkerBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 14:52 CST
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Dude*
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Reviewed By: StalkerBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 14:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Hola Good Story and hey u dide person weren't u reading childs play?? i updated it also theres only 3 ch. guess ur finshed laters
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 06:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi hi hi!! UPDATE PLEASE!!! this is an awesome story!!! but what's the underlining for?? >.
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