| "Can't Control" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapters 3 & 4 are all run together so they're very hard to read, they're both like 1 giant paragraph, except that chapter 4 has dividers between the huge paragraphs.
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Title: Can't Control
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 13:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Sess, Kagome, and Inuyasha please?
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Title: make more plz
Reviewed By: kittypanther [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its good hope u write more & make them more thought talks between the three & also make them change between who does inuyasha special during sex once its the first then the second then third.
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Title: Can't Control
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 17:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: so totally awesome!
Reviewed By: darkwolvesoverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 03:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such an interesting story!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!
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Title: Can't Control
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 22:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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